Queen Swiss Cheese Legs

EQueen Swiss Cheese Legs Part ll
MLP: FiM
Comedy
A few days after tge incident which transpired before.
Discord
Chrysalis
GalaxyNight · 1.4k words · 9 1 · 228 views

Chrysalis is minding her own peaceful business. That is until Discord shows up and as he does, her peace is nothing but a memory.

And on a side note, Chrysalis really hates Discord.

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Hillbe

Hillbe #1 · May 15th, 2022 · 6 · ·

A Swiss Cheese melt...
Cheese? I'm your Flutter Butter!
Marsh Mellow?
Toasted Marsh Mellow?
Mmmmmm Pie!
Apple
Grape?
Beats Egg Plant

ShadeNightingale

ShadeNightingale #2 · May 15th, 2022 · 2 · ·

He should have done this over his other, uh, “plan” from Season 9.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #3 · May 15th, 2022 · 2 · ·

A simple premise, but enjoyably executed to be sure. My biggest complaint is probably that this story felt a bit too quick. Here you have an interaction between two very grandiose characters who could easily go on about this topic for an hour, so it feels a bit underwhelming to have them speak so quickly and plainly. I feel like you have a good understanding of the characters, but your actual dialogue doesn't do the best job of conveying that understanding. I think this would have been better if you'd spent more time on it to beef it up a little and clean up some minor weak spots.

GalaxyNight

GalaxyNight #4 · May 15th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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I just couldn't stop laughing when I read this!

GalaxyNight

GalaxyNight #5 · May 15th, 2022 · · ·

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I know, right!

GalaxyNight

GalaxyNight #6 · May 15th, 2022 · · ·

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Hehe, sorry.
I'm afraid I was a bit lazy when I wrote this. But your totally right! They could go on about this for hours nonstop. But it was just a random idea. I'll try to build some patience in myself for more, not rushed stories. To be honest, right after I published this, I did feel as though I rushed it.

I guess I'll try by best when I post a new story.

Reggie the Griffon

Reggie the Griffon #7 · May 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

Ah good ol' Cheese Legs

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #8 · May 17th, 2022 · · ·

Hum.

GalaxyNight

GalaxyNight #9 · May 17th, 2022 · · ·

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Hmmmmmmmmm.......

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #10 · May 21st, 2022 · 2 · ·

The changeling snapped to rage instantly. "I don't do any of that friendship nonsense, and never will! I already saw how disgustingly it infected you, I won't let that happen to me!"

What she thinks will happen if she would ever look too deep into friendship:
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GalaxyNight