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Twi X Sombra is best ship, Luna is best princess, King Sombra is best villain, and Twily is best pony!!!!

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Chrysalis is minding her own peaceful business. That is until Discord shows up and as he does, her peace is nothing but a memory.

And on a side note, Chrysalis really hates Discord.

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:rainbowlaugh: A Swiss Cheese melt...
:flutterrage: Cheese? I'm your Flutter Butter!
:duck: Marsh Mellow?
:moustache: Toasted Marsh Mellow?
:pinkiehappy: Mmmmmm Pie!
:ajsmug: Apple
:twilightoops: Grape?
:moustache: Beats Egg Plant
:facehoof:

He should have done this over his other, uh, “plan” from Season 9.

A simple premise, but enjoyably executed to be sure. My biggest complaint is probably that this story felt a bit too quick. Here you have an interaction between two very grandiose characters who could easily go on about this topic for an hour, so it feels a bit underwhelming to have them speak so quickly and plainly. I feel like you have a good understanding of the characters, but your actual dialogue doesn't do the best job of conveying that understanding. I think this would have been better if you'd spent more time on it to beef it up a little and clean up some minor weak spots.

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I just couldn't stop laughing when I read this!

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Hehe, sorry. :twilightsheepish:
I'm afraid I was a bit lazy when I wrote this. But your totally right! They could go on about this for hours nonstop. But it was just a random idea. I'll try to build some patience in myself for more, not rushed stories. To be honest, right after I published this, I did feel as though I rushed it.

I guess I'll try by best when I post a new story.

Ah good ol' Cheese Legs

The changeling snapped to rage instantly. "I don't do any of that friendship nonsense, and never will! I already saw how disgustingly it infected you, I won't let that happen to me!"

What she thinks will happen if she would ever look too deep into friendship:
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XD :rainbowlaugh:

I died on spot when I saw this. It's a pretty cute drawing though! I love her design!

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I know, right?
Then you might also like this one:
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Or this story, where she gets reformed by accident:

EQueen Chrysalis Reforms (Accidentally)
An alternate ending for "Frenemies"
RainbowDoubleDash · 3k words  ·  1,235  16 · 17k views

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Awwwww, thanks! I'll totally check it out!

This totally feels like a in-canon conversation that probably took place between these two at some point during season 8 :rainbowlaugh:

you again decided to delete the second sequel?

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As mentioned, I've deleted many of my stories. The ones I wasn't satisfied with, I go back and delete them without hesitation or second thought. Sorry.

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