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PegasisterTheBrony


I'm a sweet tea drinking, hyperactive Brony/Pegasister, who likes to pretend she can write fanfiction. OH WELL HAVE A GREAT DAY.

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You know that moment when you just meet... that pony? The one who you have the instant chemistry with, and you can just tell that you're meant to complete each other's hearts?

Shining Armor felt that when he met Chrysalis at a park in Canterlot. Granted, she was disguised as Fleur de Lis, but that wasn't the point. He was attracted to her, be it by her looks, or her regal demeanor, and that's really all that matters.

Slowly, they fell in love, even after Chrysalis revealed her true form to the white unicorn. They're begining to imagine an entire life with each other, growing old together.

First, though, Chrysalis must meet Shining's parents.

*Thank you so much for helping put this onto the popular stories list!!!*
**Now with cover art by Shadow Bolt!**

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Comments ( 24 )

This is certainly different. I like it.

The girl your mom always warned you about.:rainbowlaugh:

Interesting. Also leaves the possibility for humor some day if Velvet ever runs into the mare Chrysalis chose to appear as.

One note about writing: new speaking, new paragraph. When you have Night Light and Velvet talking, you have both doing so in the same paragraph multiple times. It's not as bad as some cases since you seem to keep it pretty clear who is speaking when, but still.

That was the only issue I really noticed. I am curious to see what all happens during this meeting and look forward to the next to chapters (barring the urge for you to expand it further). You also have some interesting development for Night Light and Twilight Velvet, with some entertaining humor worked into it.

shows promise, keep it up.

6543679
Velvet already knows who Rarity is. She recognizes her (or rather her form which Chrysalis has taken) as "[her] daughter's best friend".

LOOOOVVEEE IT!! Wonderful job so far boo!:pinkiehappy:

D48

Oh god, this is looking great. The characterization for Twilight Velvet and Night Light is hilarious, and the meeting with Chrysalis was fantastic. Now to wait for the next chapter and the shenanigans that will inevitably ensue.

This pleases me. Do go on.

6543248 Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed! :twilightsmile:

6543270 OMG YES!!! :rainbowlaugh:

6543679 Advice noted! I've started the second chapter, and I've been paying special attention to that, so thank you for that notice!

6544798 I shall! Thanks!

6545147 THANKS BOO. :pinkiehappy: :heart:

6547223 Haha, thank you!! Hope you enjoy! :raritywink:

6547897 Yes. Yes it will be. :pinkiehappy:

6548606 Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! :twistnerd:

6552216 Hmmmm... Perhaps. :trixieshiftright:

So cool...i cant wait for the next chapter

This will end in tree sap, somehow.

I wonder if Velvet's gotten any pictures of her daughter's friend to be able to recognise Rarity's form.

Hahahah, best first impression? Best first impression. :rainbowlaugh:

The next chapter can't come soon enough.

cya
Raziel-chan

Can't believe I didn't read this until now!
Funniest scene EVER!:rainbowlaugh:

With an exasperated look, her husband took a seat next to her, trying to offer comfort by patting her back. "Velvet, honey, Shining's got more sense than that, hopefully - but he's bringing the mare home, and that's that! There's nothing we can do to-" Night was cut off by the glowing of his horn; after a quick second of glowing a bright gold, his horn produced a glossy magazine from thin air. The magazine, titled "Sports Illustrated," began fluttering to the ground at once, until Night Light grasped it with his magic and pressed it to his muzzle with an excited squeal.

"Ohhh! The latest issue!" As if his life depended on it, the stallion instantly began flipping through pages, seemingly searching for one thing in particular. "Come on, come on..." He muttered under his breath as he turned page after page - even after the doorbell rang, he continued on until his wife tugged it away with her blue magical aura, easily making it disappear into thin air. Velvet met Night Light's pleading gaze with her own narrowed baby blues, her sternness unwavering. "You're grounded." The mare insisted before heading to answer the door.

"But Velvet! WHY?!" Night Light sobbed, burying his face into the carpet.
The unicorn shot him a stern glare over her shoulder. "Because."

Oh my god, I'm just imagining that and putting it on repeat.:rainbowlaugh:

"You know, dear, the house looks fine..."

That's not good enough for a sons' girlfriend.

"No wonder Twi's so attentive to detail."

That's just Twi being an asocial shutin most of her life.

Only ten minutes to spare... next time, let's make it fifteen, Velvet. Just because you're in your fifties doesn't mean you can't-

Fifties? Hot DAMN she's fine for her fifties.

Also, if she does end up going, please don't judge her; when she's relaxed, she's a bit different, and she may be hard to get used to. However, please refrain from bombarding her with questions, curiosity, or fears... it will all come up over time, I assume.

She sounds lovely Shining.

"You're grounded." The mare insisted before heading to answer the door.

I thought Shining was the one who always got grounded?

Standing next to Shining Armor was a tall, black mare...

She's so pretty.

"Mom, I'd like you to meet my new marefriend, Chrysalis."

New?Did he dump Cadance? Thank Faust, I never liked her.

6801075 Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! The new chapter will be coming out soon!

I'd wish their was more of this story, I like the idea of Chrysalis being Shining Armor's old fillyfriend.

Great read and idea glad chrisy is getting some love. New chapter when?

I would like to have a new chapter please.

*sighs* Yet another single-chapter to a story obviously meant to be many multiple chapters, wasting Internet megabytes that could be used for porn. *shakes head sadly*

well drat, and this sounded interesting, but no point reading and getting attached to a story that's been abandoned...

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