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"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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Mix-up #2 · Mar 23rd, 2022 · · · 3 ·

This looks promising.

I don't tend to read clop fics (as I personally am not super-attracted to ponies in that way), but I clicked out of curiosity and I have to say... this is BRILLIANTLY written. You have talent! I think Mr. and Mrs. Cake are underrated as characters and I can totally visualize them here, as you write them perfectly. I even felt a little hot under the collar after reading. :twilightblush: Well done so far! Tracking this :pinkiehappy:

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Why thank you.

It's kinda rare that I would write clopfics - most of the time it's more m/m focused. This here is more experimental of me to see if I could write m/f (something I'm not used to writing) to see if it's possible to pull it off. And though I'm not quite done with this story yet, I do want to see how people would react to it. Hopefully, I could finish it to leave the reader satisfied.

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You're doing a great job of it! As long as you're enjoying writing it, I think it's a successful experiment. I tend to read m/f stuff myself (just not usually pony-related) and you've done a fantastic job portraying it thus far, for it being out of your comfort zone. Keep it up! I'm certainly enjoying it.

interesting so far can't way to see more

Zake #8 · Mar 23rd, 2022 · · · 3 ·

Philani is definitely trying to knock cupcake up with how fast he was on the follow up.
that's exciting.

This is so fucked up.....slight pun intended, but I enjoyed it very well.

Interesting one. I am eager to read the next parts. So far it is really nicely written. good job!

When the next updates? Damn it’s pretty hot so far, I’m hoping there will be cum and creampies galore.

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I thought this was gonna be a sex parody of The Rainbow Factory when I first saw it.

Well, that's pretty fantastic. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters.

I can’t wait to read more!

I think I can safely say that I have two more chapters in mind before I could call it complete.

I love this fics lots it really hits good kinks and the idea of such story, you don't get to see often

Damn fine read... Looks legit if i am not mistaken?

Damn... We could need one or two of this places here in germany :moustache:

This is a good first chapter. I really am looking forward to reading more.

This one is going to be my favorite chapter for sure.

This club sure helps population growth in the best way.

Sex is quite the nice bonding experiences.
Friendship with BENEFITS is magic? :moustache:

One like, we hit 62 now :yay:

when is the next chapter coming?

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My apologies, I’ve been sidetracked by both real life and juggling a dozen other things at the same time. Don’t worry, the last few chapters are coming, I just need to get around to it.

Trust me, I can be patient with this amazing fic. Looking forward to the last chapter.

This is Elysium one climax/load at a time.

And a climactic finish to end the story, i not a fan of things like the Nirvana Room device but you made it enjoyable for sure.

Part 6, quite the adventure. Very nice concept and well writen story. Fun for both genders :raritywink:

Equine are pregnant 11 month if i am not mistaken.
But that are magical pastel colored once so who know.

Twice removed cousine... Heh...

This was an amazing experiment. A fun ride from start to finish. I hope you do more like it.

Staying hydrated is important after that climax Marathon :raritywink:

However, before he could do that, he felt somepony on his flanks, pushing him forward. “No, keep it in,” he looked over his shoulder, it was the same Pegasus that had plowed the mare before him. “Get it deep as you can.”

For a moment I suspected Cup Cake.

those are some interesting spoiler tags

This might be my favorite clopfic on the site, amazing work, and good luck on whatever is next for you!

I would think Carrot would be able to recognize his wife if she were here. Even if she was a different color he would know the exact shape of her body and the way she moved.

Honestly this “Factory” could have its own anthology! This was an interesting explanation for the twins.

i wish we had more clopfics of breeding clinics or slave playground fics like this one.

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