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Dr Sharaz Jek
Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!
Dr Sharaz Jek
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Hm. It's interesting how the victims of the drugs actually aren't just beasts after all. They can think and plan ahead. Or perhaps it's a matter of dosage? It'll also be interesting to see how Fleur's altered perspective will work out. That one has access to some rather dangerous resources, such as her link with Fancypants who in turn has some control over Canterlot's water supplies. If she ends up using him to poison even a fraction of that, it'll be devastating.
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Yeah, I was thinking they can still plan/think ahead in an instinctual sort of way; that from Shining's perspective he's 'making Fleur better' by turning her like the others that have been drugged up. Females tend to carry more echoes of their former traits (Octavia and Vinyl are still skilled musicians and Pacific Glow a talented dancer) while Shining/Big Mac are closer to pure brutes, but they still maintain a certain level of cunning and have no real awareness of morality.
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this is the message of me going in blind I'm so hyped
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Thanks, hope I can match the hype!
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This was good you match my hype and surpassed.
Is there anyway I can commission you something.
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I also wonder if the need to spread the effects are a result of the drug itself or the personality of the victims. So far, it appears more like the latter's the case, but we'll have to see if there's a compulsive drive to share the infection with others, so to speak.
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Thank you! Don't feel confident enough to do commissions, but I do listen to requests. No guarantee I'll do them (Has to be something I feel I can execute half decently and with a character I at least like a little) but feel free to share them here or in a private message if you prefer.
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Definitely had the personality in mind, but I love your idea of a drug compelled to spread itself! That's a cool sci-fi horror twist.
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Okay I thought the story idea will work well with your writing style bimbofication.
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Don't be shy about hitting me up with an idea; at worst it won't click with me, but I'm open to working stuff into fics where I can so long as I can do it!
do you have the source of the story image?
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https://derpibooru.org/1667154
This story is really good just like its prequel, but I really hope it has a happy ending end not with them all gone
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Thanks! A happy ending is sadly unlikely... although in a twisted way they're happier than ever this way?
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Well, while I see your point, it is still quite sad to see that happen
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Understandable, I tend to treat the characters I love the worst!
I’m don’t know if I’m enjoying this at all. It just feels like it’s going to fast.
“Shining Armor and Big Mac grabbed mares who they then fucked but then they were done and they fucked them at least 20 times before they fucked again and it keep happing because there fucking more.”
There’s no time spent at all to be able to enjoy it. It’s all going to fast.
6,000 words later and I really haven’t seen a sex scene that was longer then a few paragraphs. It’s all just “then sex happens”
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That's fair, I tried to put my focus onto the mind breaking and the depraved scenarios around the club, and left a lot of the actual sex for the reader to fill in, fearing it might get too repetitive.
Chapter 3 seems way too out of place. It seems like it'd be better served as its own sequel, rather than tacked onto this one, because it has almost nothing to do with the premise the first two chapters had built.
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My intention was to show the debauchery of the club, and how their failure enabled this tragic situation to continue, escalating, but it may have worked better as a sequel.