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Jackelope


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I saw this on my feed and almost died

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I hope it's a 'died and went to heaven' rather than a 'died of a heart attack' :twilightblush:

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More of laughter, but semantics.

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I'll take laughter. :twilightsmile:

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Nope! I went the other way.:twilightsheepish:

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So now I'm banking on tears of joy, or crying from your penis versus sorrow and misery. :trollestia:

Author's Note:

This was very enjoyable to write, mostly because I was able to keep describing a great big penis. :twilightblush:

And, whilst I would ordinarily think it went without saying considering the extreme nature of the content I do think it's warranted here:
I DO NOT AGREE NOR CONDONE MOST OF THE ACTS COMMITTED WITHIN THIS STORY.

And yet you written it out anyway. 😏😂

Anyhoo, that ending sounds like a possible sequel is in the works.

Dear whoever paid for this:

They're horses. Someone actually went and plugged the relevant proportions into the eight-foot-tall candy cane formula, and they still end up slightly larger in that area on average. Not enough so to prevent, ahem, relations, but enough that he's lucky that his hosts are lesbians. Otherwise they'd have probably laughed a little.

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I left it open because I don't necessarily like leaving something entirely shut. If I ever wanted to revisit this idea, then I can thank the opening I left for myself.

Edit: Also, kept writing because of the penis first and foremost.

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According to the math here: Penis math
The average pony is 7.2 inches. The protag's size of 12+ is still very large by their standards.
I had to delve into a mini rabbit hole to find this out. I was originally going to make him eight.

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Fair enough, I should probably have noted that I didn't actually read the story. The correct response to the short description being "yeah, he's a freak by human standards too" wasn't something I went deep enough to find out.

A sick horse 🖕, in the home of two dykes? :facehoof:Why?

*<>* im sure princess celestia will hear about this in bon bons report ...sequel needed

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because its fucking hot

darf #14 · April 13th · · ·

The length is intimidating, but i can already tell i'm going to love this.

that's what she said

Squeal please!
Also give them hybrids! allow the patter of satyrs/centaurs be brought to the house.

Bon Bon seems the human as an intruder

Deergenerate can be forgotten for his contribution.

...Am I reading that right?

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Then again, the actual size of these ponies is very debatable. In some cases, they are depicted as being even shorter than an average person's thigh, which would accordingly change the size of their genitalia.

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For porn to happen :twilightsmile:

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I've got a full plate of commissions right now so I can't commit to writing a sequel until I finish all my other commissions unless someone commissions me to do a sequel, then I can do that. However, if I have a long stretch of free time I might take a crack at it unless I need to complete something else first.

Regardless, I'm glad both of you enjoyed this story. It means a lot to me. :yay:

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Hear, hear! :pinkiecrazy:

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Fixed both of these.
Sorry :twilightblush:

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Various sources including from canon put stallions around 4ft to 4'4ft whilst mares can almost be an entire foot shorter. The penis math put them around 4ft also. So in my mind, the average is around 7 or 8 inches. But this doesn't take into account draft stallions such as Big Mac, who could have something more accurate to real life. But these aren't set in stone obviously, I change things almost arbitrarily when it comes to size as do other authors. Wanna make ponies 5ft tall with average penis size or 46 inches? You can do that.

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S+ tier comment material

Amazing would love for this to continue

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I'm glad you thought so. :twilightsmile: As for a continuation, I answered why it could possibly take a while in my previous comment. Someone would likely have to commission a continuation or wait until I have completed all my current commissions for me to consider starting on a sequel. Regardless, I'm glad you thought so highly of it to desire a sequel. :twilightsmile:

Certified Bruh Moment

I want to hear what Cadance would compare him to her Shining.

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Without a ton of detail and description, her reaction would probably be:

"Woah."

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I once spent about half an hour fiddling with tapes, rulers, and a Twilight figurine to calculate the height of a pony assuming the official toys are made to scale and the average height of a pony and human's hips were the same.

I wrote it down on paper, though I have no idea where it went.

humangous cock

I see what you did there :unsuresweetie:

Thoroughly enjoyed this. A little bit too much on the rapey side for me, but the core concept is rock solid.

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I'd like to know the end result of your measurements. Try to find it if you can. :twilightsmile:

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I can't believe it took this long for someone to point out that pun :trollestia:

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Originally it was going to be less so. Basically, similar to Lyra, Bon Bon would get over her initial shock of the scene, see his dick slide out of Lyra and become immediately enthralled. However, and you sorta see this in the finished product, I was worried it would feel too samey. The end result was both at the behest of the commissioner and to add some greater variety in the tone of the scene. If I ever did a sequel, I would probably lean more into the 'Lyra reaction' side of it – They see his dick, become obsessed with it, they can't help themselves, etcetera. It's less rapey and more 'dick hypnotism/loss of inhibition'.

I'm glad you liked it regardless. That means a lot. :twilightsmile:

Are you planning of making a sequel with that ending?

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The ending was to leave it 'open' for a possible sequel. I, however, am swamped with commissions at the moment so I can't in good conscience divert attention away from stories people have paid me to write. Maybe if I get a free moment I might come back to this concept but it's somewhat unlikely unless somebody paid for a continuation.

9.5/10 loved it.

Anon gives off the same vibes as the guy in the lusty argonian maid

I really enjoyed this. Normally (considering how this fandom is) a fetish fic with a human in it usually it's a submissive male human getting fucked by a futa mare with a huge horse cock. So it's nice to see a human fetish fic were the human isnt being shit on, well done.

I do hope that this gets a sequel.

HERETICS EVERYWHERE. HERESY! HERESY! HERESY!!!

I feel like the "it's so big" genre is overused some times. Ponies/horses naturally have a larger staff to work with so the Idea of a human having a bigger one stretches the imagination. Granted its a fantasy so ...:ajsmug:

Still I think it would be interesting if it was other features humans have that "addict" their pony counterparts.

Example; Hands. Hands are dexterous and highly maneuverable especially compared to a pony hoof.
Humans also have a fierce libido compared to other species since we can mate at any time and arent limited by a time of year, or mating season.
I see the whole idea of human nudism being erotic to ponies as an idea as well.
Still, I think human sex-drive would be the contributing factor.

However, this story was amazingly fun to read. I almost wanna take notes at how creative and fun the word choice and plot flowed.

I was really hoping it would turn out to be a dream or a fantasy in the end :fluttershysad:. It's hard for me to get into smut when everyone acts cartoonishly debauched. Like how despicable the guy is, or how Lyra does a complete moral 180. But besides my personal grievances and the errors I've seen, this is pretty hot.

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Real horses have huge dicks.

Real horses aren't green and can't fucking talk.

MLP ponies resemble horses only when it is convenient for the writer.

OMG THIS IS SOOOOOOO GOOD THAT THIS NEED A SEQUEL! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!... sorry for the shouting. I really enjoyed this story. This is definitely going on my favorite bookshelf list. :heart::twilightblush::pinkiehappy::yay:cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/710628688722395220/713949971384369192/danoubo-afcfce7a-c176-4c1e-a3f9-595162eec79c.gif

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But heres the thing that a lot of people either intentionally or unintentionally try to ignore, MLP ponies arnt horses. Not only are they not horses they're barely even ponies by human definition. A lot of writers and artists portrayed MLP ponies as having extremely large penises because that's their fetish... and that's fine, but saying that's anatomically correct is disingenuous. This is not even mentioning that most pony dick on derpibooru are already oversized, I'm pretty sure that actually horses don't have a dick longer and thicker then one of their legs.

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That'll take too much time.

I'll just calculate it from scratch. With new, better data.

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Fantastic score - I'm glad you think so highly of my work. This type of thing keeps me going.
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Well, he does have a mighty big spear. It needs diligent polishing if it's to be presentable or useable in 'combat'.
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Glad you enjoyed it. When I'm given a lot of creativity I try to be unique if I can or original. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with those ideas you've described but there's also nothing bad about variety.
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I'd like to do a sequel but I have way too many commissions to do. Maybe sometime down the line.
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The 'it's so big' is a kink I enjoy quite a lot. Since porn is fantasy, I tend to drift towards the unreal or unlikely when it comes to what gets me off personally. And whilst I try not to let my kinks bleed into the work I sometimes can't help it – you'll typically see me spend overly long describing a penis, which often leaves you confused on if the work is straight or not.

As for your other ideas about how they can be attracted to the human I'll keep them in mind if I get paid to do a sequel or have enough free time that I can pursue it myself. The hands and his sexual stamina are good things to focus on. Thank you, not only for the ideas you put forward but your praise as well. :twilightsmile:

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With the scenario being what it was, there had to be a bit of malevolence to get the whole thing rolling. In my other stories, ones written of my own accord not commissions, I tend to take the lovey-dovey route when it comes to sex and character interaction, it's just the way I am. However, if I did a continuation, I'd be sure to have our human try to make it up to Bon Bon in some way or for Lyra to maybe soften, except in the area of showing the world the greatness of human dick or something. :rainbowwild:

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Love the enthusiasm :heart:
I'm happy you're happy. As for a sequel, read my other replies. :twilightsmile:

Welp, 12 inches is to much, we know of one or two guys in this century with that size, so I find it unrealistic in a natural way, the explanation may be that when he entered equestria, his friend grew, along with the desariability, anyway, will there be sequels? the end suggest it.

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There is cut dialogue that his dick did grow when he entered Equestria

Lyra looked upon the shaft with widened eyes, her throat suddenly longing for a drink.

"I-it's... big."

"Yeah, it is," he replied, almost as taken with its size as she was, his thumb at its flaccid base. "It wasn't always this big. I think I grew an inch a day until it stopped here – that's why I was in my room so much the first time I came here. But hey, just another thing proving this place is heaven. Good food, good company, and a massive dick."

However, it came from a scene where the sex/BJ unfolding differently, with Lyra being less obsessed and the two almost casually exploring one another. I found the pacing of this too slow and with the escalation of Lyra's obsession from when she first sees it, I didn't think it'd make much sense if she was less enthralled with it the longer time went on. In this version, also non-sensically, Bon Bon becomes cock-crazed just looking upon it once, which didn't make sense in context. I also thought about bringing it up in the shower but it was disruptive. If I do a continuation, I might bring it up there.

Also: I like big peenie weenies.

As for a sequel, you can check with my other comments. Basically, not unless someone commissions me or until I finish all my other commissions.

I should really check the tags before I read a story.......

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True but humans do exist. Seems kinda backwards to reduce the male pony size while increasing the human size just for the sake of ego.:derpytongue2:

But it's a kink I get that. I just dont feel the need for the whole "I've never seen one so big before" kinda expression. Like...yea you have why u lying? Maybe said mare has never seen an "alien" genital before and that's the kink which makes more sense I guess.

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I figure that a MLP male pony will have the genitalia of...well a pony. A pony is a small horse. Given that horses have really big dongs even if reduced to the size of an MLP pony that still makes it roughly as big as a human's genitalia if not slightly bigger.

So in these stories when the mare in question goes something like "Oh I've never seen it so large before" I kinda raise my eyebrow. I think people feel a little insecure if they arent the "biggest" in the room, so they play to this trope. Im more interested in features that human beings actually posess that would enamor an interspecies relationship.

For example humans have a fierce libido, meaning our sex drive is much higher than ponies. Ponies have a mating cycle, while humans are always "ready to go" so to speak. Another thing is hands, hands are dexterous and would probably feel rather nice compared to hooves.

But I totally get it if the specific fantasy is to have a "big dong" it's just kinda self scrutinizing to me and not honest. :unsuresweetie:

“I wonder how other mares would react?” she mused aloud, quietly, an interesting proposition beginning to form in her head...

Thats a REALY good question.... :pinkiehappy:

Welp... I hope someone paid you for this drivel man because I sure wont.

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I wouldn't take money from someone so rude anyway. :twilightsmile:
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:ajsmug:
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It's more fun not to. :rainbowwild:
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I recommend giving this a read
Basically, MLP stallions (except Big Mac and other draft horses) would have an average of around 7 inches - a whole two inches larger than the human average. The phallus Lyra asks Bon Bon to use on her is a novelty 10 inches, inferring that it's so oversized it could only be used as a gag gift or by the most hardcore of... sexers? It's possible somebody else in this version of Equestria could feasibly have a dick the same size as the human but they'd be a world record holder. So, yes, it's entirely possible that the human's dick is the biggest she has ever seen.

Also, on a tangent, the largest verified dick in porn for example (verified as in actually measured on camera, no tricks) is 10-11 inches, belonging to Danny D. He's in the 1% worldwide for dick holders, double the average size of cocks world wide. Theoretically, the largest stallion in this world going by Danny D could be 14 inches. But size wouldn't matter anyway considering the human's stamina and ability to just go and go, again and again.

Also the lack of name and description of the human is so that people could 'self-insert' into the role. It's a power fantasy. So yeah, biggus dickus is a given.

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