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MythrilMoth


LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG LOOOOOOOOOOOOONG MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!

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I'm just going to say it: Pinkie Pie looks FUCKING HOT IN THAT PIC!

5463666 Yes. Yes she does. Pity I couldn't find a pic with a seifuku closer to the one in the actual story. I almost changed it in-story to match the cover art, but I liked the colors on the one in the story better...

5463675 All I ask is that you DON'T change the pic.

5463683 Wouldn't dream of it. :pinkiehappy:

"N-no, I mean it! Y-you're hurting me, Mr. Cake! It's too rough...!"
"Your dirty little pussy wants it!" Mr. Cake grunted.

And this, folks, is why you should always have a safeword.

What nobody in Ponyville suspected was that once a week, Mrs. Cake sat on the love seat in the couple's bedroom and watched her husband have sex with the eighteen-year-old Pinkie Pie on their marriage bed.

Well...that was a twist :twistnerd:

Well...this was uh, an experience. :twilightoops:

the title intrigued me then i see it was written by moth, well now i have to read this :rainbowderp:
um OK this is getting weird :rainbowhuh:
well ok then :facehoof:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/102360/clop-clop-clop
This story's desciption needs to be changed...

5475417 No it doesn't. You just don't understand what it says.

5475465 That's not what I mean.
That story was, to my knowlege, written before any of your "actual" clop stories. At a glance, one would assume that the story is a statement declaring that this would be the only "clop" story you would write. Since you have since written "real" clop stories, the joke has loss some of its impact. I do get the joke of the story, but the desciption is worded in such a way that it appears to just be an outdated statement.

5475474 That's your opinion, and you're welcome to it, but I don't happen to share it. And I don't particularly appreciate you coming into the comments section of one of my stories demanding I change the description of another of my stories.

5475480
That's fine. I just wanted to bring it to your attention. I did not intend to be rude.

Right at first, I was enjoying it. I liked the idea of it being Pinkie and the Cakes in that sort of relationship, still exploring and discovering their limits within it and how it effects all three of them.

Those two end paragraphs, though...changed the dynamic. And it...made it somewhat unpleasant.

Well... That was actually pretty fun to read.
On a side note, that cover picture gets my seal of approval.

5466485 THERE IS NO SAFEWORD ON THE RAPE TRAIN:trixieshiftleft:

this one was a bit weird moth

Now I'm wondering if the name of Mr Cake's brother is a reference to a Tarantino movie or an old webcomic.

6707797 Closer to the latter than the former, but it's also a reference to an older story of mine, which is also both a reference to the latter and a general pun.

I want to read a sequel. I'd like to read about pinkie pie having sex with two men.

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