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Lux


I am a writer, artist, role player, and fan of MLP!

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(Second Person fanfic)

You have just moved into your new apartment and look forward to your new job at a bakery. You think life could not be any better, that is until you meet your neighbor who looks and acts like Pinkie Pie. Will you get along with this hyperactive funny girl, or will she drive you insane?

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 169 )

“I have to leave for week soon or I’ll be late.”

You might want to change it from week to work. Other than that, this isn't a bad first chapter. Seems interesting enough to have a neighbor called Pinkie Pie.

huh... i like this, usally i don't like these kind of storys, but it looks really good
also, i really really really hope that pinkies.... pinkie levels go over 9000 in this :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Nice work! I'd like to see more from this.

Caught another grammar error.

You wonder how long he takes care of her hair, dyeing it that color and making it as big as possible.

Should be

You wonder how long she takes care of her hair, dyeing it that color and making it as big as possible.

I'm liking the story so far keep up the good work.

Hmmm, intriguing. Go on.

Good so far! Can't wait for more.
If you listen closely, you can hear the speed of the plotline breaking the sound barrier.
What do you know about writing?
...Not much.
Exactly. Go back to your lab coats.
Go paint something.
what do i do?
Nobody cares.
Good to see we agree.
fuk you guys.
Try a dictionary.

Lux

Wow! It's been the first day and already tons of responses!
Thnks!
By the way, my inspiration for this story came from that cover art. Kind of a "What if there was a girl you knew who acted like Pinkie Pie" situation.

I would give you a Spike moustache but that isn't enough. Imagine that it is Draven instead of Spike. :moustache:

How.... The buck did you (and the majority of other second person authors) nail my personality exactly? You have cameras somewhere don't you?

2 CHAINS!!!!! Who said 2 chains? Wasnt me!! OH LOOK! Pinky story. TIME TO READ!!

The guys description fits me easily. But no Pinkie Pie neighbors. :pinkiesad2:
Can't wait for the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

Lux

Wow... seems like I tapped into some personalities.

Must be my network of satellites hovering in near Earth orbit.

Really good! Can't wait for the next one! :twilightsmile:

I'm really liking this story can't wait for the next one

Lux please. This story is like Finales Funkeln! Incredibly overpowered and awesome! :pinkiehappy:

good story. cant wait for the rest of it if there is going any more of it.:twilightsmile:

First also I love it.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Pink car?
Right in the dignity :fluttershyouch:

Hmmm...baked goods are REAL, just not sentient. You might want to fix that.

Otherwise, great! I love it!

Awesome story, Keep it up.:pinkiehappy:

Pinkie has finally collapsed the fourth wall!!!!!

Lux

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I was debating what to do with the car. I guess I pictured her in a normal car but pink. On that topic, Rarity's would be a luxury car like a Jaguar, Applejack would be a pickup, Fluttershy an eco friendly car, Rainbow Dash a sports car (obviously), and Twilight would have a car with the latest technology.

Lux

1941466

More like cloned herself, made her clone a human, and had her human form break the forth wall.

1942392 And the Cakes as well!!!

As for the cars, I imagine them to look like these. Pinkie in a VW Beetle, Rarity in a Jaguar XK, AJ in a Chevy Pickup, Fluttershy in a, what else, Toyota Prius, RD in a Dodge Viper, and Twilight in a Skoda Superb (apparently that has 99% of votes for the most practical car) Couldn't find one in purple though!!

I thought it would be better to add the links instead of pictures!!

Lux

1942447

Nice choices!

1942464 Well I just took your suggestions and applied my (somewhat limited) knowledge of cars that may fit their personalities. The only hard one was Twilight!!!

Here are some others, see if you can guess who for!!! 1, 2, 3, 4.
And all except number 4 match their coats!

Pat's Pizza and Party Palace. If that doesn't prove she's Pinkie then nothing else will. Also first

Discovery zone?!?
My boy!

Lux

You know, I never knew that it was a chain of places until recently.

Discovery zone? Ahh.... Memories. :pinkiesad2: I remember that place too.

Hell yeah Discovery Zone! I got to go there once as a kid, and it was A-mazing! They need to make an adult version of it...

Just imagine, giant ball pit bars, as far as the eye can see....

Also, yay update! :pinkiehappy:

She might become upset or worse hurt herself or others

No, she'll just get a few inanimate objects and have a party with them!!!

Loving the story keep going it's awesome

Lux

1952274

While writing that part, I was thinking about Stephen King's Misery.

"I'm your number one fan!" Creepy book and movie.

Your right about discovery zone. Looked like a giant fun house.

Damn giant buck tooth skatboard rat

Lux

A note about that Sex tag you see. That is merely some innuendo that I'm going to have sprinkled about the story. You're not going to see anything too graphic. But better be safe than sorry, so I included it in there.

1970793 haha, okay. thanks for the heads up! if there was anything graphic, i would stahp reading. And, as long as its "teen" it covers quote-unquote suggestive themes. Cute chapter :) :pinkiesmile:

Heh, Pinkie sense!!!
No!!! Pinkie is not allowed to be unhappy!! Do something!!!

Comment posted by Lux deleted Jan 23rd, 2013
Lux

Besides coming up with this story based on how a person would react to meeting a human version of Pinkie Pie, I got the inspiration also from this wonderful song by MandoPony.

Well, it's definitely not the "real" Pinkie Pie, as she wouldn't eat meat.
It's like there was a bleed through of "Pinkie" energy in to our world and it hit this girl!!!

Not that there is a problem with that, I'd like to meet a girl like that. Can you imagine how long she would last in bed?!?!?!?

Lux

Well, as to the question of "Is she the real Pinkie Pie," I'd say yes and no.

To be the real Pinkie Pie, she's have to be an exact copy, and I'm sure you all remember wht happened when Pinkie cloned herself.

I'd like to think she is as close to Pinkie as you can get as a human. She does human things like eat meat, but her personality is 100% the pink pony. :pinkiehappy:

As for meeting a girl like that, maybe. And the stamina part ... well considering how hyper she is normally... :pinkiehappy:

At the end it said more that most are
It should be than
just saying
k thx bye

2008234 How long she would last in bed huh
Stamina plays into this and how well you are doing plays into it to, also sugar :pinkiehappy:

Lux

Spoiler Alert:

In the future I plan to do a story involving a humanized Fluttershy and maybe one with a humanized Twilight Sparkle.

Won't be for a while as I have a couple more stories I want to do.

This is a good storie. I would love to meet someone that is like pinki in real i think that would be so awesome. :pinkiehappy:

Lux

Chapter 7 is short I know, but I consider it an ending of the first part. The next part will be interesting I'm sure as I delve deeper into this relationship.

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