Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash: two ponies leading two separate lives. Yet after a series of fateful encounters, the two will discover something that will change their lives forever.
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ohhhh
more?
Oh Scoots...
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You know what time it is?
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Great story I hope to see more.
Wow! What a reception for this single chapter!
Well, on to making chapter 2 then.
Nice story you got here. Written well, didn't spot any grammar mistakes. (Though I'm not one to ask about mistakes, lol)
Interesting start. Your story here is interesting. I will be watching.
One question is bugging me though...
Were did ya get the idea?
i always felt bad for scootaloo but then....when i read fics like this i just want to take her under my wing and treat her like a sister
I've read several fanfics about Scootaloo, particularily about her origins and her relationship with Rainbow Dash. I thought it was time to add my own part to the tale. When all said and done it will explain both.
A little note on the timeline.
The first few chapters will take place just before Twilight Sparkle journeys to Ponyville for the first time. This gives Scootaloo ample time to get acquainted with things. The other chapters will be in line with the series, after Scootaloo becomes one of the Crusaders.
So Dash has a habit of meeting new ponies by crashing in to them?
I think I know where the nickname Rainbow "Crash" comes from!!!!
Well, he met Twilight that way.
Although Rainbow Dash is cool, she is not the most graceful pony.
1645735 you need to get people's attention if you want them to read what you have to say
Just click the overlapping speech boxes next to the comment and it should send them a message telling them you replied.
1645723 two comments up buddy /-\
Good story so far! Favorited
Nice chapter.
1645902
Thanks for the tip!
I see how I can reply and quote now, so I'm getting there with my commenting!
1650937 great job
Alright, I'll say I was skeptical at first seeing the title and cover pic were almost identical to my story, but after this chapter I'm convinced you aren't copying or anything.
I must say, good chapter, I look forward to the next chapters.
Thumbed Up. Can't favorite it yet...but if the next chapter is as good as this one I'll favorite it.
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Hmmm... you did choose the same pic as mine. Really I got that one from one of my random Deviant Art visits.
Don't worry, I would never copy another writer's story.
Okay, email to tell me this has updated, but there is no new chapter?
1679184
Well, I published the chapter, but I felt it was too short, so I redid some things and resubmitted it. So the new chapter is now here!
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1680390 That is....rather appropriate.
I was hoping Cheerilee would punish DT more than that, as she is the one that instigated it.
1680662 yes yes it is
1680390
You know, as I was working on those last sentences, I had that song playing in my head.
As for the punnishment, yeah it could have been more, but show wise all I see as punishment is denial of recess, staying after class, or talking to a parent.
1687889 same here as I was reading them
Chapter 4 is in!
I expect this story to be about 10- 15 chapters in length. I pretty much know what I'm going to say for the rest of it, but it comes down to how I break it up into chapters.
This is confusing
I have two stories with the same cover pic and about near enough the same thing
I get so fused coz I can't remember the name of either of em so when I'm reading on ei think about the story for the other one which so happens to have RD being killed
So you see my confusion when you said ponies where smiling and happy
I gotta write these names down
Anyway off that rambling great chapter and i can't wait for the next chapter, I really enjoy this
Remove one of the "around her"s Now back to reading
1708616
Hmmm... well I have read many stories, some of which involve RD and Scoot, so i can understand the confusion with many of them floating about. This I can assure you is from my own mind entirely.
As for the picture, when I was working on the story, I searched on DeviantArt for a pic with RD and Scoot. Sure enough, I found that one which fit so nicely with my story.
And I can tell you that no pony will be killed in this story, so hopefully that will clear up the confusion between mine and the rest.
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thanks for checking that. I fixed that part.
This is not a bad way to do a Scoot story that we have all read before a million times. So I'm still interested and it gives me one idea for my one shot idea... maybe heh.
Chapter 5 is shorter I know, but consider it an interlude of things to come.
I believe this is relevant to what is looming on the horizon....
I like were this is going.
This is an interesting story, but what's dragging it down is the grammar. I recommend getting an editor to clean this up.
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Dammit Scootaloo, what are you hiding??? And why don't you just tell Dash??
Because she is Scoot
dawwwww
Well my fine fellow, you have once again astounded me with another excellent chapter.
My only complaint to you, dear sir, is that this chapter seems quite unusually short, compared to your earlier ones.
Thankyou my dear gentleman, for once again exceeding expectations in your story,
Your friend,
Fighting_oreo
This is not a bad way to write this type of story that we have all read, but if you need editing help I can try :)
Holds up bucket of foul smelling brown stuff..........."So, does anypony know where I can find the guy
with the temperature altering device, we have a business meeting???"
Spotted a grammar error:
It should be more like this:
But other than that.....
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Dear Princess Celestia
Where do you get all your cake from? Me and Twilight are wandering since it looks so delicous. what flavour is it and can we try any? We asked Luna what she wanted for her birthday and she told us she wanted a slice of your cake.
P.s Luna told us to tell you to, expect the return of the nightmare, whatever that means
Great chapter, Love it, hate it, bop it. No but seriously awesome chapter cant wait for more
Wow, you're pumping out these chapters pretty quick!!!!
I can see a comet heading towards a certain area of Canterlot, with the only building that gets affected
suspiciously being a orphanage...
One more chapter to go which should be on Friday.
As for the comet, maybe not.
By you know, the moon is a pretty big place...
Know what, send the mean ones there
and keep any of the nice ones
that would be me
I would more expect Luna to show up. With her feelings of abandonment, being unwanted
and worthless. I can see her arriving in full Lunar goddess form, full armor, with a squad of the Lunar stallions. Possibly with Rainbow and Scoots along.
Why cliff hanger I can not wait.
As a Brother myself, I thank you for such a touching story so far. also I want to thank you for the dedication.
And so the story ends. Maybe next year I'll make a sequel!