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Commando-Scarecrow


I'm a relatively mentally stable person with a penchant for high drama stories with attempts at high action pieces justaposed with some comedy, meaning that I like action, a good story and out of spa-

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There was once a young man named Miles Wilhelm. He was neither bitter nor was he angry at the world. He lived a life like any other, until one day, when a mystery woman crashed into his life and nothing was the same ever since.

Based loosely on the MLP fanfic, My Little Dashie
I don't own the rights to this at all

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 82 )
Comment posted by K1kst3r deleted Jan 8th, 2013
Comment posted by totallynotabrony deleted Jan 7th, 2013

This was interesting, heh, liked and faved in hopes of an continuation.

Based loosely on MLD, hm, wonder where this will go :o

Anyways, can't say too much yet I guess, but, the fic moved along fluently, and I personally don't have anything to point out atm, so, well.
Thanks for putting this up for everyone to enjoy, and good luck with your next project, whether it'll be continuing this or something else :twilightsmile:

are you gonna carry on from there:twilightsmile:

wow this was not bad at all! i cant wait for another part to come out better hurry my mind is making me go insane from anticipation :pinkiecrazy:

Honestly, this was just an experiment to see how well I could depart from the usual adventure fanfcs I write. Now that I know I can do alright in this style, you'll definitely see more chapters on this.

rain is going to destroy the laptop....isn't she?:ajbemused:

She is gonna do more than just destroy it. She will falconpunch it :D

Great story, wanna more

And I wouldn't say it's loosely based on MLD. While I have been reading it, I thought there is gonna be one same thing as in MLD - ponies are gonna do some Multiverse-TP-Stuff and go find her, lol

Hey i am not critisizing But in the picture couldn't RainbowDash Just Move the rain clouds?

1929902 It was the first picture of rainbow Dash in the rain I could find. I tried looking for a human dash first, but they always got too, well...

I see potential on this!
Good work! :pinkiehappy:

Good work dude. Can't wait for the next chapter. :pinkiehappy:

I am so jellious of Miles...:raritydespair:

1929902

Maybe she's too depressed to bother(?)

ThisĀ is getting better and better, keep up the good work. Want oar,and even though I'm not a clopper,can't waitfor da sex scene, curious how you are gonna describe it :rainbowkiss:

Ah paintball. its all fun and games until they hit your groin. But your friends will laugh:facehoof:

Hahahah paintball!
I have good and bad memories from it :rainbowlaugh:

Sorry for spamming the comments, but I want moar :rainbowkiss:

I have a feeling that those handcuffs might return later...:rainbowderp:

I woulda just said that my friend was having nightmares. Then invited him in to show her. Seems like an easy answer to me at least :P

1961769 mine was funnier... and it was the only thing I can think of :twilightblush:

Please whatever you do...Do not make this another My Little Dashie ending...Can't take another Celestia Filly-napping again.
MOAR IS NEEDED. :flutterrage:

1973703 Believe me when I say that, beyond a shadow of a doubt, there will be three more chapters before the story ends

Great chapter and now you have me wondering what the heck is going to happen next...
CURSE CLIFFHANGERS!

MOAR :flutterrage:

I Love paintball :rainbowlaugh: it hurts like FUCK though
Last time I went paintballing I was sore all over

"Don't say goodbye, Rain," I gave her a look that was both joyful and sad. "I hate goodbyes."

GAH I know that's fro somewhere :twilightangry2:
Doctor who maybe?
RED vs BLUE!! :pinkiehappy: that's it!

2003268 I am absolutely not above using a line I heard somewhere else if it's good enough. And also, RvB is awesome!

That was just brilliant! Brilliant! :rainbowlaugh:

Why is it that in every fanfiction earth is considered horrible. I mean yes we do have downsides, but there are more good ones than bad

Yay happy ending :pinkiehappy:
Sweet Luna Celestias fucking (not as) Awesome (as Luna)

Glad to have a happy ending :'D

:yay: Yay!
Rarity and her generosity saves the day! :raritywink:

Pretty nice story by the way :)

1936947 there needs to be a squel it cant end like this its so sad http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/29131675.jpg can there please be a sequal

why does miles discribe me? :derpyderp1: do i know you? :derpyderp2: let me explane: i have short brown hair, i fall for red heads all the time (i can only asume that happens here, im on page 6) i am such a lover of paint ball i have my own gear. WHAT THE HAY!! :rainbowhuh:

That was... (pause for dramatic effect*)

AMAZING!!!! :D Good story bro. :)

Will there be a sequel?

Keep up the good work :)

/)*(\

2295951 There is a sequel... sort of

I got distracted by other projects, but you can read the first chapter of the Sequel, Miles: a Sequel to Rain.

If I had to choose may favorite part out of the whole piece, it was the first-kiss chapter. With the sunset. They're a personal weakness of mine :twilightsheepish: When I was somehow able to call out clop art and combine it with a romantic sunset kiss scene. I'm awesome like that.

never I repeat NEVER play paint ball with pinkie pie

I have a feeling that he will need those handcuffs later

NO NOT LIKE THAT YA PERVS

So this what my oral surgeon, Dr. Wilhelm did before getting into dentistry...

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