• Member Since 17th Jan, 2016
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MidnightShy


Hi! I hope you're having an amazing day!

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In this story, Pinkie Pie invites her friends over for a sleepover. Her friends, obviously, say yes. When her friends look through Rainbow Dash's phone, they find out about something interesting.

Edited by one of my best friends in the whole world, (and my waifu~) ZuZuSky21, before I added some finishing touches.

Like we'd say here in the Netherlands: "Veel plezier met lezen!" or just in English: "Enjoy reading!"

THIS IS A REMAKE OF THE STORY: THE PINK BRA. A STORY I MADE A WHILE AGO. IF YOU ARE INTERESTED IN READING THE OLD VERSION, CLICK HERE. IT'S QUITE DIFFERENT FROM THIS ONE.

Tagged sex because of indications of something sexual happening afterwards. There is no sex or any other sexual themes in this story itself.

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Comments ( 9 )

"Okay, is that a pink bra I spy ubder clothes?" Sunset smirked.

I like it, but careful with spelling. Also be careful about using commas when needed. Otherwise, good!:pinkiehappy:

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Oh yeah, right. I'm very sorry. I will look for the spelling errors when I get out of school today. Thank you for pointing it out!

I think the story flows better than before, this was fun to reread. :D

A good story! The sleepover stories are always the most fun. Especially when SoarinDash is involved! Best ship!

And Dashie was perfectly in-character. I love it! :twilightsmile:

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Oh my goodness, thanks a lot. I really appreciate that. :twilightsmile:

it's 12 am and I shouldn't be screaming

I loved it!

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