Don't Cry Because It's Over, Smile Because It Happened!
Sometimes, it takes just a minute for great things to happen. After all, we all have a minute left.
One day, after practice, Rainbow Dash will finally understand the wonders that giving somepony just a minute can create.
Edited by Chocolate Cherry. Thank you a lot!
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Hey!
Few little mistakes, which are, I think, more typing blunders than real errors. Don't forget, at the preterite and with the auxiliary "do", the verb isn't conjugate (it's not "didn't went" but "didn't come"). This, apart...
THIS. WAS. DAMN. CUTE
You really transcripted Dashie's character well, I can clearly picture her acting this way and Soarin was also perfect. And the first part of the story, the choreography description was just perfect. Instant favorite 
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Thank you for that advice, I forgot again
Thank you!
That was adorable 😍
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
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Yes, I did
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I'm glad you liked it so much
Don't say that! You are pretty good!
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And you should believe more in compliments given to you
Oh my God.
Oh my God.
Oh my God.
THAT WAS JUST SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOMMMMMME!!!!!!!!!!!THERE MUST BE A 2ND CHAPTER OR ELSE I'LL DIE!
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Hahaha, thank you
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Your welcome!
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Right!?
Wow. Just wow. This is amazing, I love it so much! Going into my Favourites folder!
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I'm glad you liked it!
I'M IN LOVEEEE
This part
this story was so good! It flowed so naturally from the banter between the bolts, to the descriptions of their practice. Stellar job!
The emotions were conveyed very nicely too - the teasing laughter, the casual conversation, Spitfire screaming - I liked it very much!
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It feels like forever since I wrote this but that still remains one of my favorite interactions I've ever written
I'm glad you've liked it!
Thank you for the comment and the compliments 