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JackRipper


A real lady killer.

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After a particularly poor flight rehearsal, Captain Spitfire chews out Rainbow Dash for her sloppy form. While distraught, Rainbow Dash is able to keep it together until said rehearsal is over.

Soarin wants to console her, but Rainbow Dash isn’t the type of mare that needs consoling. Maybe she just wants some company?


Rated E for good vibes and general cuteness, easily the tamest thing I've ever put out.
Cover art by xX-Mr-No-Name-Xx on Deviantart.
Proofread and edited by Sir Penguin of Chapped Lips.
Written for and suggested by Wonderbolt Writer. 

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Comments ( 27 )
JackRipper
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8266126
Good or bad? :twilightblush:

8266128
Ii loved reading this story

Niiice, Soarin scored! Woohoo, So when do we get a sequel? :rainbowwild: I'm kidding! You've done plenty enough already and I enjoyed this! Thank you for writing it JR.... It hath been up-voted accordingly. :moustache:

And on another note I spied some tiny little DEL lettering next to my name on the story cover? So...I am confused by that. XD

Awh:heart:
Dat ending tho
This story is amazing

JackRipper
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8266143
Glad to hear it. :scootangel:

JackRipper
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JackRipper
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8266147
This story would not exist unless you asked for it, so I gave credit where it was due. :ajsmug:

this gave me the feel of a canon episode... and I really liked that about this fic. It felt natural even the "shiping" part

JackRipper
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8266199
It took some effort to chisel away at it, with the help of my friend, I think it turned out well. :twilightsheepish:

Ooohh love it my friend, Love it. And they are so cute together to. :heart:

Awwwwww that was sooo freaking cute!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

8266894
What can I say except your welcome~:pinkiecrazy:

I love how the story is very detailed, very fun read!

I'm going to fav it.:pinkiehappy:

JackRipper
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8275073
Thanks, it was a gift for someone. :heart:

Cuuuute! I love it!

JackRipper
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8325204
Thank you. :heart:

 but the temptation of apple pie is just too strong!

:rainbowlaugh: This was just priceless. Love this story.

JackRipper
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8384189
You can thank Wonderbolt Writer for this story's genesis. :scootangel:

This was a neat short story and I always enjoy reading a Soarin/Dash love story. He tries hard to win her over and she tries to deny her heart; so cute! Bravo for this episode!:raritywink:

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