Sunset Shimmer is in the hospital. Fluttershy is in a coffin. Neither of them is very happy about it.
Written as an entry to the FimFiction Feghoot Festival.
(Most of it) pre-read by Ludus.
Edited by Lofty Withers.
Art by twilite-sparkleplz.
Sunset Shimmer is in the hospital. Fluttershy is in a coffin. Neither of them is very happy about it.
Written as an entry to the FimFiction Feghoot Festival.
(Most of it) pre-read by Ludus.
Edited by Lofty Withers.
Art by twilite-sparkleplz.
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I dunno how you can sift through so many awful stories that you have to deny from this website, and yet still stay sane enough to write quality, hilarious shit yourself.
Love ya, man.
jack what the fuck.
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Sheer willpower. Also, thanks.
This was very funny, continue the good work
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What?
I mean, if you say it sucks, I'll take your word for it ;p
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Don't worry, it's the good kind of suck
I mean, the only parts of the setup that are relevant to the final pun are "Fluttershy is a vampire" and "Fluttershy is the speaker's girlfriend" which I think docks you points in terms of being a feghoot, but it was still funny.
Also, yeah. The good coffins have a crapton of padding on the inside for reasons that I'm assuming I don't know because the ones I can think of are stupid.
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Glad to hear you liked it.
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what prompted you to write this?
its good, don't get me wrong.
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it's for a contest
Screw you
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wowwww rude
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So the kind I give you, then ;)
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I plead the fifth
Cute! Flutterbat is one of the better memes this fandom produced. Also yay feghoot.
Fluttershy X Sunset Shimmer is a ship that’s gaining a lot of traction these days...did I miss something?
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Just something I felt like writing.
Magnificent, terrible work. Best of luck in the judging.
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Yeah, this story sucks...blood, that is. Nice job.
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Thanks!
Princess Twilight sticks her head in.
Preach it sister!
I am offended with the false advertising in your title
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I’m sorry
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I think padding in the coffin dates back to times when death wasn't always certain, and there were rules about leaving the "deceased" laid in the open coffin for a few days, just in case they woke up.
I upvoted, cause this story rocks.
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That's rood
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Read my comment again.
It was a little weird and jarring to have Fluttershy get so upset with Sunset over potentially killing people only to drop it in less than a paragraph. It made the last pun feel really off-tone for me. Other than that it was entertaining.
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Honestly one of my favourites too. Don't think anyone missed anything, except years of quality content that has not been produced due to SunShy ignorance...
That was nice.
You fiend! Is there no contest safe from your klutches?
...I don't know why I read this. I looked at the context, saw that it was about stories ending with bad puns (which I generally don't like), and read it anyway. And gee, there was a bad pun at the end that made me sigh in disappointment.
In all seriousness, this was pretty funny and I think you did a great job.
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Looking at my competition and how I feel about this entry, my odds of placing high are slim.
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Thank you very much.
This is bad, and you should feel—
Ah heck, this literal pun was funny. I always was susceptible to ouns others think are terrible.
omg my favorite fimfic author jackRipper wrote a new story. i love it so much!
Get out.
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Never!
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Well that was entertainingly deranged even before the pun.
And of course her kiss woke Fluttershy up. EVERYONE knows Vampires wake at Sunset.
Eeh, the pun's rather anemic, in my opinion. I mean, I don't mean to be negative, but it's the second most basic pun one can make with vampires.
I oughta dock you points for it, but I'm not judging the contest.
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See? That's the kind of bad pun to go for!
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Dude... why didn’t I think of that. Now I’m mad at myself.
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It's not too late to extend it :p
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The first being 'fangs for the memories' and the third being 'driving me batty'?
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You know what? You’re right, I can salvage it by adding that tidbit at the end. Good idea!