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It was a long cold life, but a soldier must carry on. But when this shocked soldier is pulled away from a fatal situation by none other than Rainbow Dash: he must overcome his cold hardheartedness and care for the Pegasus that unmistakably saved his life.

First fan fiction ever, and probably first story I have ever written in my life. So any constructive criticism is appreciated. Thanks.

Chapters (6)
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im likeing it so far idk about any one else :twilightsheepish:


Thanks so much for your help. I'll be sure to change that as soon as possible. I can't believe I forgot to indent. :facehoof: Oh well. Thanks for letting me know. :derpytongue2:

My little Dashie? No.
Make something happen, don't care what, just not My little Dashie.


Dont worry, there will be an ending NO ONE will expect. :ajsmug:

This is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!! :pinkiehappy:


Thank you so much! I am writing it right now, and hopefully will have it done by at least Saturday. :raritywink:

1978468That is great! Only problem is I'm going to be away from the internet until Sunday... :fluttercry:


Well, it will be here waiting for you when ya return. :derpytongue2:

1978490And when I do return it shall be read. Keep up the good work, and thank you for writing this. :pinkiehappy:

Well this is something to look forward to after my deployment


Yes indeed! And thank you for your service to our country. It is an honor. Thanks for reading.:twilightsmile:

I love it! I was thinking about do something similar, but with a pilot shot down over Pakistan. If only I had three thumbs, I would use all of them. ^_^ :rainbowkiss:


Thank you! :twilightsmile: I appreciate your enthusiasm. I hope the next few chapters are up to everyones expectations. And you should write that, I bet it would be an interesting story. :raritywink:

Ah man! I'm waiting for chapter five, wondering what it will be! Fantabulous story so far, dude, props on the patch idea, too.


Thanks! I hope to have 5 done by tomorrow or at least by Sunday.:twilightsheepish:

Very interesting, I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the rest of it.

1978688 I'm sure I speak for most of us here when I say, thank you for your service to America and willingly putting yourself in harms way to protect us, and keep those cowards who wish to corrupt and interrupt our very way of life at bay. Thank you most gratefully for what you do and who you are, as well as the other men and women who serve this fine nation. Semper Fi.

1983787 thanks guys ill be sure to check up on y'all if we have Internet in Afghanistan. Thank for your support again. Raiders to the objective! Hooah!:twilightsmile:

totally not call of duty inspired! (well it doesn't sound over the top like cod)

Chris spoke with a more serious tone of voice, “Tomorrow morning, O-six hundred hours. You will be accompanying the bomb technicians on the rounds around the base. Be careful… attacks are getting more frequent. Mitchell will be going with you but I’ll be staying here as the medic on duty. Oh and… be watchful for Max… he has a tendency to be, well, let’s just say he is smart but lacks any common sense.”

I laughed at his last remark, “Is he an infantry gunner or something?”

He simply shook his head with a sigh as his gaze was cast downward, “He is the bomb de-activator.”

My jaw dropped and stared blankly at him, “You’re… kidding right?”

Again he shook his head but now with no reply. After a few moments of silence Mitchell again spoke up, “He knows what he is doing… but aside from deactivating bombs… I legitimately think he is insane.”

I sighed while unpacking as he spoke, “As long as he doesn't get us killed I don’t care how he acts.” Both of my new friends nodded in agreement and prepped to get some sleep as well.

“See you both in the morning…” I said drowsily as the long plane ride had worn me out. I drifted to sleep after thinking about my past and what had lead me to this point, then thinking about how I had gotten something I always wanted: friends.

sounds like discord...:trollestia:


Woah. HASBRO COPIED ME. How dare they... :rainbowderp:

Good observation. :rainbowlaugh:

Another good chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! Hopefully it won't be a long wait.
P.S. sent from the middle of the woods


Thank you! And happy camping I may assume? :derpytongue2:

Fireblitz likes him, that much is obvious.

And no pony romance. pwease?

that would be weird when a human female likes the Main C.

Also, how hard is it to join the air force?

Well i for one think so far so good! You've got me sucked in so keep it up and coming :D


Of course. I didn't intend, or want any pony romance into this at all. :scootangel:


Thank you! I was hoping to captivate the reader's attention and maintain it. Seems I have done my job! :raritywink: I will be leaving on Tuesday night and will be traveling to Washington D.C. I may or may not have the sixth chapter out by then, but I will be working on it today and tomorrow. :pinkiehappy:


I live in Northern Virginia, like 30 minutes away!

I will say nothing more though.

Great chapter. Can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

Well it would apear that you have drawn in a new reader and from the feature box no less.

Yup all of your dreams shall be realised...

It was there last night but I only got to reading this earlier this morning.

And it's not there now sadly so I've got no proof sorry.


Wait wait wait! Are you serious?! Like... on the front page?! :applejackconfused:

Yes otherwise I wouldn't of found it because tipcaly this isnt what I search for or would normaly read but it was featured so I gave it a read and liked it...good job.


:pinkiehappy: YES! This has made my whole day so much better! Thank you for reading! Im glad you enjoyed it. :rainbowkiss:

That's good...

I await more chapters of lager length so they don't take me a minute or so to read.

1990690 No problem, hope you have a safe trip to DC and i guess either way i'll have to remain patient :)

Hey it's Sid:) And AHSGLASHGLS. I really like this story! I can't wait to see where it's going to go! :pinkiehappy:

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