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Commando-Scarecrow


I'm a relatively mentally stable person with a penchant for high drama stories with attempts at high action pieces justaposed with some comedy, meaning that I like action, a good story and out of spa-

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Sequel to the fanfic. Rain

Miles Wilhelm, once a human living on earth, has been brought to Equestria by Princess Celestia herself at the request of Rarity. He has followed the once pony-turned-human Rainbow (Rain) Dash, the love of his life, and has found a brave new world as an orange pegasus.

What's next?

Now, the young stallion has to adjust to his new life as a stallion. It'll be hard, and there will be pitfalls along the way, but he's up for it. If, for nothing else, only for Rain and for Scootaloo.

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Original Artwork by InTheStardust

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

Uh, you misspelled sequel in the title. Just saying.

'Im gonna be the very best, like no one ever was!
To catch them is my real test, To train them is my cause
I will travel across the land, Searching far and wide'

Points of you know the song :rainbowkiss:

2112008 The pokemon to understand.. the power that's inside!

Gotta catch hem all
I'll teach you and you teach me

Great story so far!
Waiting for moar.
MOAR!

Comment posted by brodash deleted Feb 13th, 2013

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I wanna be the very best
Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test
To train them is my cause

I will travel across the land
Searching far and wide
Each Pokemon to understand
The power that's inside

Pokemon, its you and me
I know it?s my destiny
Pokemon, oh, you're my best friend
In a world we must defend

Pokemon, a heart so true
Our courage will pull us through

You teach me and I'll teach you
Pokemon, gotta catch 'em all

Every challenge along the way
With courage I will face
I will battle every day
To claim my rightful place

Come with me, the time is right
There's no better team
Arm in arm we'll win the fight
It's always been our dream

2112050 I wanna be the very best

Like no one ever was

To catch them is my real test

To train them is my cause

I will travel across the land

Searching far and wide

Each Pokemon to understand

The power that's inside

Pokemon, its you and me

I know it?s my destiny

Pokemon, oh, you're my best friend

In a world we must defend

Pokemon, a heart so true

Our courage will pull us through

You teach me and I'll teach you

Pokemon, gotta catch 'em all

Every challenge along the way

With courage I will face

I will battle every day

To claim my rightful place

Come with me, the time is right

There's no better team

Arm in arm we'll win the fight

It's always been our dream

I like the sequal so far

keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

/)*(\

Yay! I'm glad you updated. :pinkiehappy: :yay:

Can't wait to find out who they have to meet. :twilightsmile:

Keep up the good work. :scootangel:

/)*(\

You better hurry up with the next chapter or so help me....

A great chapter again...keep it up:scootangel:

Very nice chapter. Wish it was longer though but oh well.

Just a few spelling errors I caught while reading this:

but I'm pretty sure she put on that show for my benifet. Judjing by the expression on her face when she did it, I mean. "Should you even hafta ask, Miles?" She threw me a Rainbow Dash trade marked competative smirk.

*benefit
*Judging
*competitive

Chapter why are you so short and so few?

great story, the only thing I dislike is the fact that you update so leetle :flutterrage:

yes you are still working on this story

When I saw this updated, I literally fist pumped.
Please update more often. :pinkiehappy:

So I can't help but notice that, for your cover image, you took an artist's work, edited it, failed to source it, and also failed to credit them. Tad disrespectful, in my book.

Here's the source. I'd ask that you provide it.

updated 45 weeks ago.... idgaf if youre working on other projects.... UPDATE

Pls update I really enjoy this story

Well its been over a year in update limbo... happy birthday!

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