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Nov 7th "Maybe"



This story is a sequel to Could Be...

Part 52 in the Maybe series. Violet experiences her first heat, and you aim to make sure nothing happens on your watch. Only problem is can you actually do it?

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:rainbowlaugh:, the people who dislike this story are disliking it for two reasons.

1 they never read it and just dislike it because it's to long.


2 They read the first few parts (when I was starting up) and said "Oh it's bad so all must be bad."

~ Honestly if there is one person out there that has read everything and still hates it them i'm sorry you didn't like it. But realistically I just don't see how someone who read everything could have a problem with it. (story wise not gammmmmer).

^But really if anyone read all and still doesn't like it message me I would love to see what I did wrong :moustache:

3408029 you know for some reason I imagine stony looks like your OC. :rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:


Stony is actually my original editors OC from all the way back in part 6 of the MAybe series...But I liked the sarcastic writing so I kept using him.

To see what he looks like visit Soildrock's profile (found on my friends list or in TWC group).

~There's supposed to be a whole story for him *clears throat* but me editor be slow Iz afraid. So questions about the filly's mom is so far unanswered :derpytongue2:

3408089 ~There's supposed to be awhole story for him *clears throat* but me editor be slow Iz afraid. So questions about the filly's mom is so far unanswered
I laughed so hard I fell of my top couch.

how'd i miss this update?????????!!!!!!?!!?!!?!?!??!?!?!??!!?!??!!?!??!!!!1/1/1/1:twilightsmile:

its what ive been waiting for :twilightsmile:

vielets first heat

sh*t just got real:twilightsmile:

what? no "fun" in this chapter?:twilightsmile:

Sorry, Violet is still a virgin. :eeyup:

3458117 for now..............................

3458127 no worries, im not gonna rape her :twilightsheepish:


Also Guy would most likely burn half of Equestria just to get Sparky.

3458141 ...

*casts an flame seal on guy*
there :twilightsmile:
*guy removes flame seal with ease*

Holy mother of-




Oh the irony, Guy meets Twi, guy has sex with Twi before they are married (or even really dating) Twi got pregnant and Twi's dad hates Guy... Guy doesn't want anypony around Violet and he's protective* :duck: Irony?

3458175 i guess so... If i can remember how to use irony more then one way, even when i look up the word, I always forget it later on...

So i gave up :twilightsmile:

3458175 and also, its hypocritical


lol, true. But I give you some slack. :pinkiehappy:


Well hoped you enjoyed Violet's heat, now if you excuse me I have to go and get part 53 ready.

3408029 up to this point, there is still something... But I SIMPLY can't putt my Death Star's Scope on it... hmpf... *brain wrack* something that gives your stories a strange feeling of emptiness, like something is missing...
But It seems that I simply can't see it... :twilightangry2: :twilightoops::raritydespair::raritycry: ... :twilightblush::derpytongue2:

Well well well, Sparky, way to go~~~

3458221 ... wait... that comment sounds really, really wrong... *caught*


emptiness? :rainbowderp:

:rainbowlaugh: Oh, you must want somepony to die.


And either way, you should know their is always slow parts between the big stuff. Just look at the Might Be for Us story...Which I was surprised you go through so fast. :trollestia:

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