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The city is dark and a nightmare made out of concrete, wood, and steel. One mare must stand above all the corruption and put an end to it. But in a city of dastardly decadence, not everything is as it seems, and a team must be assembled in order to combat the evil that lurks in the underworld.
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Try and guess who she is.
Interesting.
I think I like where this is going, but it would be much easier to read if you hit tab before every new paragraph.
(Props for actually putting it in paragraphs, though.)
Oh hey found this story after a long time and finally get the reveal. I'm ok with this.
A appreciate that. It was super annoying avoiding revealing to many clues. I'm actually surprised nopny guessed it earlier to be honest.
Now THAT is an evil cliffhanger... or a proofreading mistake.
1777145Honestly, I would have preferred making that first half before the reveal it's own chapter, but due to the length I wanted to keep, it didn't turn out that way.
*reads last sentence*
And your cliffhanger isn't?
Heh heh. I got the hang of it by that time 1786766
..."greatest fly in all of Equestria"?
Best typo I've seen all day.
1777145 i'd say evil clifhanger
Heh... this is gonna be good, I can tell already...
As canon dictates, the amulet can only be taken off by the wearer.
1838142 I was well aware of that, but her horn was straight up GONE, so I didn't thik it would still be bound to her
That's what they think!
So Trixie is Miss Magnificent. Interesting.
But what on earth does her costume look like? The chapter doesn't really makes it clear on the aesthetics of her costume, beside saying she wears a cloak and a mask.
So to see if I got this straight..
The child that Rainbow is referring to is one that is inside RD herself, not the one that Black Diamonds got by seducing Brae.
Glad that Black Diamonds got her evil smile wiped clean off her face. Hopefully the child she bore, and never will raise, thank God, would never follow her foot steps. Man, what a fall from grace she received.
Overall, I like this story, but part of me feels that it should've been longer in some parts. Some of the details on certain characters could've been expanded. Plus, I feel like more SummmerxTrixie should've been shown in the story (though part of that may have stemmed from RD and Braeburn having their lovemaking moments). Also, what happened to Winter? We know Summer rescued her, but was she sent to the hospital, was she dead? What happened? And are Summer and Trixie still Fire Starter and Miss Magnificent?
This feels like a nice ending, but I totally would not mind if someone comes up with a sequel from this story.
I might actually set up a TV tropes page for this fanfic, if and when I get the chance.