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Comet Burst


The man without a plan.

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A beautiful meteor shower was the last thing anyone expected to cause the Blackout. Not a power outage, but a series of deaths caused by an unknown killer. The bodies were recovered covered in some weird black sticky material and saliva. Witnesses claimed it was a monster with large white eyes, rows and rows of dagger like teeth and an outrageously long tongue.

It was also the same time another entity appeared. Another being of darkness, but this one benevolent. It fought against the monster, defending those caught in the fight. Official orders were to arrest them on sight, given by Princess Luna.

The entity called herself the Mysterious Mare Do Well. The monster called himself Venom.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 49 )

It's good but I don't like what you did in the prologue I'll fav for now.

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What is wrong with the prologue?:fluttercry: It's meant to be similar to the Venom comic 'Shiver'...

1863547 Its just well makes me think your already telling the end of the story.

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Ah, I get it. I don't want to spoil it, but that is actually early in the story. It gets much darker towards the end. I put that there to set the mood.

I haven't read many of the comics, but Venom has always been my favorite villain.
Do continue!:pinkiehappy:

So venom in equestria havnt seen this before here have a like :heart:

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I was actually disappointed by the lack of his presence here, so I decided to give him a story. I'm glad you like it though!:twilightsmile:

Mare-do-well trixie luna as her teacher add nmm and this would be my dream fic

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:raritystarry: That gives me an idea for this story! If I write a sequel to this, that will definitely be used.

1917732 Allow carnage in as well " Daddy don't need to be left out their alone without us HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA" :pinkiecrazy:

And just so you remember to do it here is an incentive to what happens if no carnage

well fuck trixie had a good life

MOTHER OF CELESTIA VENOM IS A WE NOT AN I A WE HE USES PLURALS GEEZ :flutterrage:

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:duck:
He uses 'we' when he has Eddie Brock as his host because they are in agreement. If you read carefully, you'll see all his hosts are involuntary, meaning he forces them into submission. Therefore, he says 'I' instead of 'We'.

Read the comic 'Shiver'. He says 'I' instead of 'We. Thanks for the input though!:yay:

At long last, Trixie's tale of woe comes to pass. But where there is death, there is also life.

She is neither Trixie nor venom anymore but something else something strange yet powerful beautiful yet frightening she was a true hero :fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritydespair::applecry::ajsleepy:

no trixie what will twilight do with out you' but seriously nice chapter though couldn't help but think that i wished i cared more for trixie and her death.

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Thank you both for giving her a eulogy. I'm very glad you both enjoyed the story.:raritywink:

You are most welcome she deserved it make sure either one returns if you do a sequel.

1964629 Yes And agh grrrk WE WILL HAVE OUR VENGEANCE. :pinkiecrazy:

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For what?:trixieshiftright:

Why are you made at me(Does this have some thing to do with that chicken, because I swear Rainbow dash said it would be alright with Fluttershy).

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Hey, don't be discussing inane chicken activities here! :ajbemused: Applejack doesn't like her hens being talked about.

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What she has a problem with scootaloo?

Is this a clop fic?:rainbowhuh:

In the begining I thought this was a clop fic:rainbowhuh:

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I take it you were disappointed it was not?

I am intrigued.
:trixieshiftright:
Trixie is also.

"Not here obviously." he spat back at me. "Then what do you know?" I asked in my nasty voice "Why was that meteor shower so important? I saw the shipment. Why were you so interested in it. He sighed and said "That was no ordinary meteor shower. Celestia broke up an asteroid and its pieces fell to Equestria. The asteroid itself was not ordinary either. It changed course in space to come here, like it was being steered by someone or something. Why wouldn't I be interested?" I narrowed my eyes and said "How did you know about that?"

It needs to be like this:

"Not here obviously," he spat back at me.
"Then what do you know?" I asked in my nasty voice. "Why was that meteor shower so important? I saw the shipment. Why were you so interested in it."
He sighed and said, "That was no ordinary meteor shower. Celestia broke up an asteroid and its pieces fell to Equestria. The asteroid itself was not ordinary either. It changed course in space to come here, like it was being steered by someone or something. Why wouldn't I be interested?"
I narrowed my eyes and said, "How did you know about that?"

Except for not splitting up the speakers, this is an awesome story.

That, dear comrades, is why one should always be Link. He coulda neutralized Venom fairly easily.

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Don't forget Carrion. He's the good symbiote.

I actually like Toxin more than Carnage.

"Gang Green"
What a name...

Oh, because Venom can shapeshift. I had forgotten.

2010385 Huh. But do carnage first since he is toxin's daddy dearest.:pinkiecrazy:

Noooooooooo, Trixie no die plz! Gahh, it was going so good as well. She and Venom would be happy twisted couple and flowers and rainbows, but NO.:raritydespair:

Noooooooooo, Trixie no die plz! Gahh, it was going so good as well. She and Venom would be happy twisted couple and flowers and rainbows, but NO.:raritydespair:

I have the strangest of boners right now

CONTINUE!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:




if you don't mind that is

I like to think what venom spat out was carnage.

Well, at least its better than the first part where Venom uses Twilight for a host, and gets revenge on those who hurt her during the Canterlot Wedding. I liked the second one. It was really better than part 1. I mean, I'm a Twilight Sparkle friend.

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