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Soaring Symphony
I'm just a simple guy who loves reading (mostly MLP fanfics) and hopes to be a good writer myself someday and, hopefully, also get involved with music somehow (notice the microphone cutie mark).
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Definitely a good clopfic to me! It's certainly something I haven't seen before, so that's a big plus. And this may be just me, but I'm hoping there will be a biiit of an error in the separation spell.
I'm way too into genital swaps for my own good!
Not the usual Cakecest.
I like it.
This was great.
Going forward, I would like to see them talking to each other about the differences between themselves, and how each other's body parts feels, as a stranger in each other's bodies.
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Thanks for the complement dude. I appreciate it.
Btw
Can you point to any specific examples of where you thought it came off as clunky? I'll gladly go back and edit.
I'm hoping they will eventually do some self-fucking, like derpibooru
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Or perhaps thinking with portals,
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While that is a good idea, I've already got the whole fic planned out in my head and that's not part of it. For one thing, hard dicks can't bend like that. And about the portal idea, Pumpkin just had her first sexual experience and Pound has never used unicorn magic at all. I seriously doubt either of them would know a spell like that.
Besides, that idea already exist in another clopfic
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/355432/removable
Why would I want to write about something that someone else has already covered way better than I could? I don't mind writing clop, but I try to make it as original as possible.
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No clop worked out well for me. It meant I could read it at work.
What if they end up not wanting to split up? What if someone at their school starts to develop an attraction to their fused self? There's a lot of different places this could go. I'll certainly be watching.
Never would have thought of that tbh, but I can see where it comes in at. Two minds sharing one body would wear on both minds, and if they get separated safely what would they be? If it's months or heavens above years before they get separated Pound and pumpkin may be used to being one pony. So after getting separated they would probably need therapy or someone to talk to.
Anyways great chapter and keep up the great work.
I believe I've already told you what I want to see going forward, but I'll repeat for good measure.
I would like them to talk about how they feel. The ways they're different from each other, physically and otherwise, and how alien each other's bodies feel to them. Hearing about their experience is one thing, but I want to have them discuss what it MEANS to them.
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Don't worry. I have plans for that. I just haven't gotten to that point yet.
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Thanks. I got the idea from Steven Universe. The way the concept of fusion works in that show, a fusion has it's own personality, distinct from the people who make it up. However, that personality doesn't always manifest right away, as seen in episodes such as "The Answer", "Alone Together", or even "Jailbreak" if you pay really close attention.
Btw, I plan to use "Alone Together" as the name of a future chapter. It's just too perfect an example of wordplay to not take advantage of.
in which Pound finds out why shower head is one of Pumpkins best friends
Yeah, soap makes for a pretty shitty sex toy. You know how it feels when it gets in your eyes? It doesn't feel a lot better on other sensitive tissues.
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Uh . . . thanks for that. I don't know if I should feel disturbed or if I should be laughing right now.
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I'm not sure how it is for girls but it usually feels decent on my dick, so I don't know what you're talking about honestly.
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Yeah, lady bits are a lottle bit more delicate than your cock. You—may wanna take note of that for the future.
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Bubba, you're reading My Little Pony fetish porn. If you found what I wrote strange or disturbing y'all need to step back and think about your life for a second.
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I think at this point, we need a picture of the merged twins.
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If you'd volunteer to draw it, then go ahead. Otherwise, tough luck. I couldn't find such a picture anywhere and I can't draw for s**t.
Half of me wants this to continue as a legitimate story, the other just wants more smut. Can't wait to see how the others react to seeing a fused P n' P. I bet their individual friends will be like, wtf? And god forbid a bully picking on them for this. Also the homework, how would they distinguish who did homework? Or are both paying attention to the Same thing when one is, and the other can't tune it out. So many questions, such is the pain of an inquisitive mind.
I would love to see more of BOTH sides, story & smut. At least tell me You are doing alright??
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Yeah, I'm fine. I'll try to write more of this fic, but between job searching, collage and general laziness, it might be awhile.
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I'm just happy you are okay.
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Just a friendly reminder that I really like this fic, and I look forward to seeing it continued/completed
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I'm gonna need you to go ahead and un-cancel this fic, m'kay?
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Yes please >.>;
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I canceled the fic because I got sick of writing it. Maybe I came up with the initial idea, but I could never quite figure out how to flesh it out into an actually good story (or, at minimum, mindless smut with no plot that's still hot to read about)
You two are perfectly welcome to pick it up yourselves if you want. But I don't want to
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Oh boy...this gonna be good
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Well that was a fucking lie /s /nm
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how dare