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Hell of a debut, my friend!
Keep up the good work.
Idk fam seems to me like this might end up getting pretty Internal >:3
Definitely a good read so far! I'm looking forward to more.
You're hitting it out of the park on both story and eroticism.
I really appreciate how this story came out, and believe me: it's 95% him. I just did a little rearranging on the final draft.
Great start, keep up the good work my good man
Pretty good. I wasn't sure what to make of Celestia's behavior there at the end. My guess is she's played the role of a diplomat for so long, it's difficult for her to act or feel like an ordinary mare.
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Thank you for your kind words.
Your observation is valid. Thorax was also puzzled by her sudden coldness.
I picture Celestia as a very responsible leader. Even though she agreed to have sex with Thorax, she can have her doubts and second-guesses (Thorax also second-guessed the situation at a certain moment). I think she is professional enough to swiftly switch to her “Princess mask” and evaluate the events later.
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I cannot thank you enough.
Please don't discount your contribution, you did a lot to make this readable.
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Thank you all for your kind words and support.
Pretty great! I'm excited to see more. I love the ending of this chapter.
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Maybe she's weighing the pros and cons of a political marriage? But doesn't want it to be strictly just that.
Interesting start. I am eager for more.
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Ur picture and sentence match together perfectly but yea same
Oh man. You said this was an epilogue but it feels like the start of a series! This is great!
Guess we know how Celestia likes her eggs in the morning.
Fertilized.
If this is the end then i am a little upset. The start suggested thst this would be more lengthy fanfic.
I was really hoping the previous chapter was the start of an excellent series. Really sad you decided to end it here
This could definitely be a great start to a longer story or series, but if it did what you wanted as a stand alone, then its great for that too. Congrats on getting featured with your first story, its a good one! Hope to see more of your writing around.
That was great. I will admit I'm a little disappointed this was just one chapter plus an epilogue, but I enjoyed it greatly nonetheless.
Seeing how multiple people have been commenting on it, I guess the one bit of advice I can give is to be careful about the expectations you set. I think people would have been much less disappointed if it had been clearer from the start that it was intended as a one-and-done.
That aside, thank you for the great read!
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Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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Indeed. I am sorry for disappointing you on that front.
I still have plans for more ThorLestia and I might write a sequel one day.
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I've read your comment in the middle of the night, and it caused irreversible damage to my subconscious. Yet, I love it. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for your appreciation.
You're completely right. I will make sure to manage expectations better in the future.