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Zoura3025


World's Worst Brony. Enjoys a wide variety of writing, from crackfics to smuts to serious novel(la)s. Always up for some chatter.

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It's always the nerds who are the closet nymphos...

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I keep tellin' ya, you keep lockin' that girl in a castle with a bunch of books she's gonna find the smut novels eventually.

So now instead of trying to take over Equestria every once in a while, dying, and repeating, now he's coming and fucking Twilight (and impregnating her when possible) every once in a while instead?

He might cause more chaos doing this than when he was trying to take over the world, if Flurry Heart is anything to go by.

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Oh, this is absolutely true.

I've had a good three-quarters of a brain to write a follow up to this about the fallout of Twilight having three whole kids.

This was funny. The base concept was absolutely primo. The punctuation, vocabulary and mood continuity errors detracted a little, but it still got my hooves-up just because it was still so dang fun.

"I will return, Princess, and next time!... I will check on our foals, time permitting," He declared, disappearing in a flash of dark magic.

This line was hilarious. You could have easily ended it here.

If you do a sequel, I want to know how Twi' manages to carry three safely. Twinning is, as Celestia alludes, a risky proposition.

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Comedy and lewdness definitely go hand in hand for me. Hopefully the mood dissonance wasn't too distracting. I tend to jump around all the time in terms of energy level ao it's hard for me to keep a consistent emotion.

I'm glad it at least got a laugh out of you, though. So long as people enjoy what I write, I'm happy to share. ^^

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