Young, Clueless, a dragon with hunger for a hoard of knowledge but my hoard is to be spread with friends, families and more.
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something that is only made by dragons like me
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Seemed rather strange.
Lots of implication but not a lot of showing.
Story centers around dragon semen being used in various things but never shows the collection.
There is a scene with zecora but what was collected was never mentioned again and isn't his normal method.
Lots of ponies are stated to have used his products for various things but we don't actually get to see anyone other than zecora use any of it.
his desire for a for a loincloth nor how exactly his species is different is ever fully explained.
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To be quite honest im disappointed with myself in this one. As is, the limited words (10,000) had to be a condensed story. Original had about... 15,000 words with details and that was before the actual sex scene. I know this story wasnt done and i will go back and redo it right, especially with scenes involving his product usage and the effects. As is, i dont think it will take part in the contest and will delete it and redo it again
Pretty good, hope we can see more!
Fun concept, well executed. Did take a bit too long dancing around what everyone reading is going to know is dragon's cum, but the interactions with Zecora were lovely.
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I plan on doing a rewrite with extra dialogue and more explanations. Due to the contest rule a third of it was cut.
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Indeed
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So to answer most of the blank slates here, this story was so heavily cut do to contest rules. In fairness the story was originally two three chapters in length so im going to do a Special Cut with this one later if i can with more dialogue and explanation.
No promises though
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1. Flavor and possible remedies. He has a sort of apothecary shop so that makes sense.
2. I would say they would enhance flavor of what it is on. Kinda like dressing on salad or sauce on steak.
3.It is the same type that you would add to preserve certain ingredients like in cake and such but he would also add mix it with other liquids to either be more fluid or thicker. Its kinda like the eggs and mill used universally in a lot of recipes.
4. As for young ones not eating it... that portion and exclusive content will not be present here.
As for everything else your wrote after number four.... im sorry but i do not understand any of it.
I added semen to the list now yes. I am writing a novel the circles around that added extra gem of theirs...
Any chance you will post the extended version I really enjoyed reading this and I love a lot of your other stories too
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I am working on it but need a more free time to do so. Hopefully soon.