Life is basically complete for Twilight. She and her friends are practically retired, Equestria is at peace, and everything's been wrapped up for at least another thousand years.
Well, you'd think so, anyway. You know how it took two years for Twi to mention her brother? Well...
Tagged with Sex for implied fun times in the future.
I...uh...uh...well that ending was something.
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I briefly wondered whether or not to include that, and then I said "fuck it".
Wonderful, brilliant, madcap!
Also, Pabbley cover art, squeeee! That actually what drew me in.
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Pabbley does do wonderful horses, yes. (And this was the best Evil Twi image I could find that didn't contradict the description.)
Sparkle family gets around.
You mad lad, you actually did it
ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffudge
r u n , we've got accidental incest here help
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Woah... Nice story.
Interesting, but not too shabby
Perfect length and a nice 1,800 words
Could use some better grammar but we will work on it.
Yep... i'd say this is a pretty good story
I rate it... 8.5/10
Good job author
I feel like poor Night Light didn’t really take the time to parse this out.
Does Star have a goatee? All the cool evil twins have one.
I did not expect to see this so soon after people spitballed it in that Discord server. Delightful bit of madness. Thank you for it.
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There's a couple things that can kickstart my writing process. One of those is seeing it as a challenge.
That said, it helps that I loved the idea. It was fun as hell.
Is that what they're calling it now?
funny story, ya done good m8
also that ending got me like:
lol, the sparkle cousins banged
That's advanced kinky
Twinkle Sparkle, little Star.
Family tree has spread SO far.
Dayum. Nice story. Ending sounds like a cliffhanger tho.
I've heard about keeping things in the family, but this is ridiculous.
Of course you'd think that, Sparkle.
Hot.
So, that would make Starlight a first cousin to Trixie and Twilight, and Trixie a half-sister to Twilight.
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Nah, I feel like it's in character for ponies to raise potential villains to reach their full villainous potential.
Based
Damn... this nearly puts the Apple family to shame...
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I love everything about how this fic was written! The humor, the silliness, everything is just so entertaining and fun to read! I hope ya didn't mind, but I simply had to read this awesome lil' fanfic!
Audio Linkyloo!: https://youtu.be/-5-uz47CTzY
(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)
Thats gonna be a fun family reunion
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ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh
: "You do know you could have just aked Trixie about that, right?"
: "Why, what could you possible know about fated rivals?"
: "...Think about it for a moment."
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Wise choice.
I'm confused. So are Twilight, Starlight, Trixie, and Star quadruplets? Or sisters? Or something else? I'm so confused...
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Trixie is Twi's half-sister (Twilight Velvet slept with Jack Pot), and Glimmy is Twi and Trixie's cousin (shares a grandma). Malign Star is Twilight Sparkle's twin sister.
Will there be more of this timeline? It is extremely interesting.
That sounds like the Sparkle family alright. Looking forward to the convoluted family tree Flurry will eventually have to deal with thanks to Chrysalis. She has to have a few hundred half-siblings.
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Thanks! This is a pretty good story. I hope you write a sequel in the future!
Ponies man! I believe it!
What
The Sparkle dynasty is a large one
Not bad
Wow, that's really out of line