Delivery

While digging through files they shouldn't read, Crow's Nest and Daisy Dancer find out the true mother of Princess Twilight Sparkle... now to tell her without getting arrested.

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GlitchyFox

GlitchyFox #1 · Mar 27th, 2021 · 11 · ·

"Well, that ended well!" Daisy smiled.

yes it did

"I got stabbed." Crow pointed out.

even better

manacar

manacar #2 · Mar 27th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Lol

FlamboyantQueer

FlamboyantQueer #3 · Mar 28th, 2021 · 5 · ·

Daisy and Crow seem to be the perfect comedic duo.

I would just love to see them again in another story.

Paper_Pen

Paper_Pen #4 · Mar 28th, 2021 · 2 · ·

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Thank you! I'm still working on their exact dynamic as they're some newer characters of mine, but I just started writing a new story featuring them tonight!

BoltAshera

BoltAshera #5 · Mar 28th, 2021 · 12 · ·

This reads very much like the intro to a much larger story, full of Momlestia, that I would love to read. That said, it's also an enjoyable oneshot.

Jedi Wolf

Jedi Wolf #6 · Mar 28th, 2021 · 6 · ·

I really like the dynamic that Daisy and Crow have going.

Hillbe

Hillbe #7 · Mar 28th, 2021 · 4 · ·

No good deed goes unpunished Stabbed!

You know those cider bottles? You get a deposit back if you return them...

FluxFeather

FluxFeather #8 · Mar 29th, 2021 · 3 · ·

Hey

Pause

Pause #9 · Mar 29th, 2021 · 9 · ·

"I was just transferred from New Jennet."
"Oh, Jennet!" The mare's ears perked up, "What part?"
"The bad part?"
"It's NJ, you'll have to be more specific."

Mildly insulted and therefore funny to me.

Paper_Pen

Paper_Pen #10 · Mar 29th, 2021 · · ·

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I'm a state over in MA, I insult with love lmao

Vulomalkirr

Vulomalkirr #11 · Mar 29th, 2021 · 5 · ·

"The bad part?"

"It's NJ, you'll have to be more specific." She snorted, "Jog on, afternoon shift is just about to clock out."

As a former NJ resident, can confirm as accurate.

coto616

coto616 #12 · Mar 30th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Awesome, this is a good story

We need to know more of them

SRY

SRY #13 · Apr 1st, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Yeah, we definitely need to see more of these two lovable idiots.

Level Dasher

Level Dasher #14 · Apr 2nd, 2021 · 2 · ·

"I was just transferred from New Jennet."
"Oh, Jennet!" The mare's ears perked up, "What part?"
"The bad part?"
"It's NJ, you'll have to be more specific."

As a New Yorker that laughed at this, I now don't feel bad knowing that New Jerseyans laugh at it, too.

Evil Paladin

Evil Paladin #15 · Jul 11th, 2021 · · ·

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"I was just transferred from New Jennet."
"Oh, Jennet!" The mare's ears perked up, "What part?"
"The bad part?"
"It's NJ, you'll have to be more specific."

Even in Equestria, Jersey is a hole.

Down here in Texas, I'm amused by the consensus of opinion on New Jersey's bad reputation, by those that live in and near it.

Mlp4ever