The hooded figure took its gaze from the Moon Lord and looked back to the group, the being's mighty blade still in hand. The unknown female entity is about to speak; however, Twilight unintentionally cuts her off:
“N-no... this can’t be. P-Princess Celestia?” The lavender mare questions with tears flowing down her cheeks “T-this is a new test, right? You’re just testing me... that’s it, isn’t it?” Twilight couldn’t accept what had transpired as she continued to question Celestia’s body as if the Sun Princess would respond.
The lavender alicorn even begins to tap Celestia with her right forehoof. Even though Celestia wasn’t Twilight’s actual mother, the lavender alicorn loved her all the same. As far as she was concerned, she had the honor of having two mothers.
Princess Cadence was right there with Twilight on the opposite side of Celestia’s body. Here was her adoptive aunt, who practically raised her until she became old enough to be on her own. Like Twilight, the Princess of Love couldn’t accept this either as both mares almost looked crazy as they, metaphorically and literally, were beating a dead horse, although the beating is in the form of pleading.
Of all the alicorn princesses present, the one whose heart shattered most was the Princess of the Night: Luna. Her heart was filled with sorrow and regret as she recalled all the times she had hurt her sister without intention. Sure, they’d often argue with each other, but Luna would never willingly harm her beloved sister. Her biggest sin that she regretted all of her life was when she allowed the beings known as ‘Nightmares’ to enter her heart because of her jealousy and pain, which turned her into Nightmare Moon. All Luna could say was:
“I’m sorry, Celly... I’m so sorry...”
The rest of the group watched on with their own tears as they all moved closer to Twilight, Cadence, and Luna. Spike, in particular, walked up to Twilight’s left hind leg and held on to it as if his life depended on it. The rest of the Element Bearers, Zecora, Tempest Shadow, and Starlight Glimmer began to speak their minds, their own words of sorrow.
Suddenly, their words of sorrow begin to shift and become much darker. Even though they were all heavily heartbroken, something erupted within them upon seeing their beloved sun princess lay dead before them, something that most Equestrians rarely feel: pure rage.
Twilight, Cadence, and Luna watched their friend's and loved ones' reactions with wide eyes, and their mouths hung agape.
“That heartless fiend, how dare they! Princess Celestia didn’t deserve that!” Rarity shouts in anger.
“That no good varmint! Why, ah’ got half the mind to shove my favorite shovel right up their backside!” Applejack threatens.
“This Moon Lord is nothing but a brute; I shall avenge the Princess when I stomp him with my hooves. My combat staff is ready, as is my rage; you shall not survive this day!” Zecora exclaims.
“You know what?! Right now, I wish I was still evil because I need it for what I’m going to do to that thing!” Starlight Glimmer shouts angrily.
“I was about to get my horn back! This loving princess offered to restore my horn, and you took it away from me! You took it from me!” Tempest Shadow roars out as magical energy leaks out of her shattered horn.
“You no good meanie! I’m gonna stuff you into a cupcake and stomp on it!” Pinkie Pie exclaims as her mane was noticeably deflated and the color of her body becomes darker. She even managed to pull out a kitchen knife from her mane.
“You will burn for this!” Spike antagonizes.
“I’m gonna clobber you until there’s nothing left!” Rainbow Dash exclaims.
“How dare you! We ponies simply want to live in peace, but here you are, trying to take away our way of life! I never wished for any living creature’s life to be snuffed out, but for you, I hope you die!” Fluttershy roars out as even the Element of Kindness became... corrupted.
“No, It can’t be...” The hooded figure says as the world around them suddenly takes on a darker shade of purple.
The alicorn princesses turn to the hooded figure as they recover from their surprise at the words spoken by their loved ones. Luna is the first to speak as Twilight and Cadence walk alongside her.
“Doth thou know what has transpired? We can see by thy reaction thou art familiar with this unknown phenomenon.”
“Yes, but before we continue, I must shield your friends from the effects of the Corruption. They do not seem as resistant as you and your fellow princesses,” After saying these words, the hooded figure rips off her cloak and tosses it into the air.
“Allow me to introduce myself; my name is Celebes, the Dryad.” Celebes thrusts the Terra Blade into the marbled floor, the blade's edge piercing the floor with little to no effort as a green aura engulfs the Dryad. This aura then alights the entire area, consuming every being present, and upon closer inspection, one could even see green leaves floating around as well.
Suddenly, Twilight, Cadence, Luna, and Celebes look back towards the others as they seem to have calmed down from their outburst, but the way they recovered made it seem like it wasn’t them saying those things and threatening to act upon it. Sure, they were indeed angry, but something seemed to have amplified their rage.
The group recovered and began to question what was happening, ranging from: “Woah, I never thought I’d say those things.” to “I-I swear, I don’t want to be evil again.” Pinkie Pie, in particular, returned to normal as her mane was inflated; her kitchen knife also vanished.
“What did you do?” Princess Cadence questions. “And what’s the Corruption?”
“We don’t have much time,” Celebes answers. “We need to stop the Moon Lord before things get worse,” She readies herself for battle, “Just know that you are all protected from the effects of the Corruption thanks to my prayer and that I’m your ally in this fight. I know you have no reason to trust me, but we must cast those things aside and fight together.”
”NAY!” Luna exclaims with her Canterlot Voice. ”THOU SHALL TELL US RIGHT NOW, DRYAD. OUR SISTER LAYS DEAD BEFORE US, AND THOU KNOWS EXACTLY WHAT IS HAPPENING. WE HAVETH THE RIGHT TO KNOW!”
“And I will tell all of you what is happening, but we must-”
[RAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRRR]
An otherworldly roar cuts off Celebes’s words as the group looks to the skies. There in the dark purple skies of Canterlot, the group, except for Celebes, looked on in horror as multiple threats descended upon them, but it wasn’t the Moon Lord.
These flying terrors were considerably smaller than the eldritch, but they still dwarf the average pony, even an alicorn in size. These beings were best described as flying parasites. It wasn’t just the skies, however; the very ground below them began to shake violently.
This instantly alerted Applejack and Pinkie pie thanks to their connections to the earth as an earth pony, not to mention Pinkie's ‘Senses’.
“Tail, eyes, legs, mane, everything! Twitching! My Pinkie senses are going crazy!” Pinkie Pie exclaims as she continues to twitch and shuffle.
“Pinkie’s right, y’all. This ain't no ordinary earthquake... somethin’ is moving, a lot of em!” Applejack comments
“You mean there’s something worse than those flying, things?!” Rarity questions.
Suddenly, the ‘earthquake’ stops but only for a few seconds before multiple worm-like creatures erupt from the floors, the streets, the ground, and the entire landscape of Canterlot. These worms easily dwarfed the flying parasites, many of them being three to five times the length and overall size of the aforementioned entities.
Uh oh, corruption time! I don’t know if the crimson will be included as well, but it’d be interesting to see the ponies reaction to a biome made of living flesh and blood.
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Funny you should mention, Crimson will indeed have a role to play in the story. Don't worry this isn't a spoiler because as you know, when creating a world in Terraria the player must choose between crimson or corruption. Now, I personally believe that Crimson is more dangerous then The Corruption which is why I've decided for Equus to have Corruption, that way it makes a bit more sense for them to be able to fight against it and for it to not be so one sided, while the world our main cast will be dropped into will have the Crimson since they will be supported by the NPC's of Terraria who knows how to deal with it not to mention the help they'll get with all the weapons and items there. This might sound funny, but Equus is lucky to have The Corruption and NOT The Crimson.
...Really? I only come out for the corruption sequence?
I am NOT one of those things...
Strange though, I can't tell if Terraria is being brought into Equestria or if Equestria is being brought into Terraria.
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Not to sound rude, my favorite pony serial killer, but you're bold to assume THAT will be your only appearance.
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Both actually, the corruption is being brought to Equus due to The Moon Lords actions and as I'm sure everyone knows The Main Six, Zecora, and Starlight will be thrown into the world of Terraria. You could say a piece of each world is going into the other but they will effect those worlds in their own, yet massive, way.
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I'll trust you on this one... Vampire knives would be my favorite weapon to use by the way. They sound lovely. And painful.
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This world is corruption, however, not crimson. So no vampire knives, sadly.
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Oh I wouldn't be soo sure about that. Equus has corruption, that's true, but more shall be revealed.
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Wait, are you going to dump them into Hardmode off the bat?
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Oh no, that would end them instantly haha. I do however plan to have Equus be infected by corruption while Terraria, the world our main cast will be thrusted into, will be Crimson and there is a reason for this which will be revealed later. This way both biomes gets the chance to shine, oh and don't worry about the Hallowed. I've got that covered too.
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All right, I trust you.
And I suddenly have images of Zecora and Fluttershy fishing together, though for different reasons.
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Ah, but you stated the terraria world would be crimson in another comment.
So much of this is out of place; not just this reaction, but all the others. They are too broad, and, most of all, out of character. All three of these chapters have had me simply wondering, "How does this make sense at all?" There is little cohesion to this story. The premise is good, great, even, but the execution needs work. There aren't any grammatical errors, thankfully, but the flow is all over the place and all the characters seem like dolls instead of living beings.
I'd recommend researching each character, how they speak, how they've grown as characters by the time of this story's start (since you right off the bat had Twilight revert to nerding out when there's a literal world ender before her, which is very out of place) and just get a better feel for the world of MLP.
I do find this story to have potential, and I apologize profusely if this offends anyone, but I do believe this story needs a full rewrite.
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Sorry for the really late reply.
I thank you for the feedback. Looking back to these first few chapters after a couple of months, I actually do need to readjust their reactions. I can admit that, at the time of writing these first few chaps, I thought I had a good grasp on the ponies. Now though, and looking back here after making them more accurate in the later chapters, these first few do need adjustments.
Oh crabs… 😨