I've been at the Friendship Academy for about a year now, and I've grown fond of my friends and Equestria since coming here. Of course, there are some things that I'm still confused about such as why ponies place such a big importance at dances like this Amity Ball that Headmistress Twilight is announcing.
It doesn't sound like my kind of thing. More like something a bunch of couples on dates go on. Oh, I suspect Silverstream will finally ask Gallus out, but that's about it. I doubt anyone is going to ask me out. I'm a dragon and most of the creatures here are ponies. There's no way any creature is interested me in that way.
Right?
*An AU of The "She's All Yak" episode but with Sandbar asking Smolder out instead of Yona*
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Ohh sandbar and smolder shipping very interesting you got my attention can't wait to read it when I'm gett out of work 😊
You know that is kind of terrifying but I did read a story called Why does nobody want me? when silverstream got really mad about what Grandpa Groff said to gallus which I don't blame her but goodness she was pretty scary when you try to cross her like that 😰 but it is sweet of her ( well sort of under the circumstances 😅 ) that she defended gallus like that I'll probably do the same thing for him to
This is going to be very interesting so Smolder and her friends are talking about what they're going to do for the weekend especially after the long days of school work which I can't blame them it's a headache but then Twilight made the announcement of a dance coming up called Amity Ball so now they're just preparing for the dance who's going to go with who or what but while this was going on when smolder was going back to the room Sandbar was going to ask her if she goes with him to the dance together which that surprised her and she doesn't know how she makes a respond to him so now she has to prepare for the dance I wonder how this will work out I guess we'll find out next time but this is a very interesting alternate universe turn of events
Well This seems interesting. I don’t think I have seen much Sandbar x Smolder works before. I don’t ship them but I am curious to see how this turns out.
I also liked Smolder’s narration on Silverstream’s crush on Gallus. Her threat to that bully sounded terrifying.
Might wanna add the alternate universe tag to this
Edit: finale got around to reading this, and it was really fun. You’ve got the group down to a te. Can’t wait for the next chapter and to see how it all plays out
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hmm let me think
that's actually a pretty interesting Theory actually I never thought of that
Well this was pretty interesting so far so smolder is worried about why did Sandbar ask her to the dance which he said the most nicest thing he ever said to her so with that she said yes but now she has to prepare for the dance which that's going to be a tough one for her but with a little practice I'm sure she got this and it looks like Silver Strand finally Ask gallus to the dance yay and it looks like gallus knows about Sandbar and smolder boy I can't wait for what's going to happen on the next chapter
Wow, there is so much I like about this chapter.
Smolder going to Spike for advice was very cute, especially how she said she considers him a kid brother. I see them as having a friendship as close as a brother-sister too. I also kinda liked the theory of Kirin being descendents of dragons and ponies. I think I heard something like that when they first debuted?
Smolder and Sandbar’s talk before she accepts was also very sweet.
That reminded me so much of when Sunburst got his cutie mark.
I also loved that final scene. Not only did Silverstream have an amazing fake out with that black box, Gallus accepting was nice too. Then of course Smolder and Gallus both warning the other not to hurt Silverstream and Sandbar. Gallus saying that Sandbar is practically his brother was great since lord knows Gallus needs all the family he can get.
So overall I loved this chapter.
This chapter was great can't wait for the next one.
By god I loved every word of this, you have each character down to a tee. I love the little back and forth between Gallus and Smolder at the end, usually you just have the character being threatened to get nervous but you expertly showed not only Gallus’s tougher side but also gave us an inside into how strong a bond he has with Sandbar.
On that subject I laughed so hard with Silverstream proposal, it felt so like her and it really got me for a minute.
Spike being the first one Smolder goes to was also great, love seeing their dynamic as the older sister Spike never had, really wish more fics went into that. Also Spike crushing on Rarity is always fun to see (mainly because I am Sparity shipping trash lol)
Also something I really appreciate on a personal level. is from what I gather from Gallus saying he needs to get a suit, means that everyone is gunna dress up for this thing... cos I frigging love when these characters dress up fancy for a dinner or a ball. When I saw it was only Yona and Rarity that dressed up in the shoe I though that was so lame. Really can’t wait to see how things play out, or to see what Rarity has planned for Smolder.
That was a bigger comment then expecting, but great work, can’t wait for more
Sweet alternate take here on this ep but with Smolder instead of Yona, also just love how you used the already established sibling vibe in the show between Spike/Smolder as she went for him for advice. Think the best part of their conversation was this bit
True words were never spoken😁
Looks like the dance is on the way and smolder finally got her dressed and she's prepared for everything hopefully things go well
This seems to be going nice. I'm excited to see how this turns out. Seems like Smolder has really put some thought into a potential future with Sandbar.
I loved that whole exchange. Not only for Rarity being over-protective of her little sister, but Sweetie revealing another one of Rarity's old crushes.
Awww just loved Smolder's reaction at seeing the finished dress
, not to mention Rarity's reaction at hearing Sweetie wanting a date of her own, priceless!!! 
Looking forward to see how the dance goes for her, hopefully *Scales & Tail* will help Smolder out from the sidelines during the event!
Dawww,I love it. Ponies/creatures dressing up fancy has become my ultimate weakness since watching this show. Very nice descriptions of each,
Can’t wait to see how things turn out, and hopefully Yona and Ocellus can find a date inside.
Also Sweetie the blackmailer is best sweetie
Awww, that’s was a very cute ending. Plus it didn’t end with the dance getting trashed which is always a plus. Hope this isn’t the last time you right for the you g six, the interactions of the group was a constant enjoyment. Great work
Oh wow that was a pretty good story so with the dance going on everything looks like things happened pretty well and we saw gallus and Silverstream so cute together dancing and flying everywhere even right up to the end when they won silverstream kiss gallus was so cute and he was not expecting that at all lol lucky dude but with smolder and sandbar is even more precious seeing them dance is wonderful and they have a cute moment together so after the dance it looks like they made an official of being a couple and they share a Kiss the ending was very sweet and I was kind of like awwww 🥰 but anyway this was a good story and a very unique shipping which i like so awesome job man
Loved the dance & outcome, a very enjoyable story from beginning to end!
This was a cute story.
That was adorable. Like I said previously, not a ship I personally support but it is still a cute story, and that’s what I fully support. Gallus and Silverstream certainly had a good time too.
To smolder and sandbar. Silverstream and gallus
Do you know what you have done! now I ship it so bad and there is so little of the ship.
Great story and a very good read. Thanks!
Great story. I’ve just found a new guilty pleasure ship. Hope to see more stories of these two.
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Ah yes, I recognize that particular bit of myth about the Kirin! Look it up!
I wonder if the genetics work so the offspring is Kirin if the mother is pony, and Longma if the mother is dragon.
now if this aint the cutest thing ive read all my life then i dunno what is!!! I really wish i could like twice
That was great and to be honest I like sandbar x smolder more then the canon one sandbar x yona