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KorenCZ11


Average brony obsessing over the main cast with an unhealthy desire to see them in a dark fantasy setting.

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When I was little, life was oh so simple. The world was bright, the sky was clear, my family was all here. But the changing seasons would take everything I held dear, and once it was gone, I wondered when I’d disappear. Things would turn for the better, things would turn for the worse, and when the weight was all too much, I couldn’t bear it. Just as things change, oh so much stays the same.


Nineteen years after Luna was freed and fourteen years after Princess Twilight rose to power and began to modernize Equestria, Big Mac has finally made it on his own. Enough land he can work on his own, a loving wife, two great kids. However, as Granny used to say, when it rains, it pours.

One terrible truth after another, Mac learns of a life he may have ruined without ever being a part of it. In an effort to fulfill his legacy and pass on his heritage, Mac does what a stallion does and tries to fix it.


Set in my 'Bright Future' universe which diverges from canon after season 4.


Edited by the lovely Comma typer.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 7 )

That was a great story, characterization was spot on, interesting lore, decent resolution.

I hope there are more stories in this 'universe' because it is pretty great.

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At the moment, there are a few, but after writing this one, I believe I'm going to do one for several characters interacting with their families. One of the things I did in the three days I spent writing this was create a timeline for where all the stories I've written that contribute to this world (and just what exactly happens to make it diverge from canon) fit in place with each other. Not everything has been decided just yet, but I have the framework to work around now.
The story below takes place about seven years before Far from the Tree, but is much more of a day in the life than anything else.

ESo too, Shall This Pass
April showers bring...
KorenCZ11 · 1.4k words  ·  16  1 · 741 views

And this story takes place three years after Far from the Tree and features Rarity and her daughter.

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Rarity wakes up in the morning only to realize she missed a rare call from her daughter, Pearl, late last night.
KorenCZ11 · 14k words  ·  24  3 · 686 views

Very good story. Glad it was a happy one. Reading the sneak peak of it made me fear it would be a darker story, glad I was wrong.

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Nah. The dark story in this... series I guess, would be the one where I go into detail about what happens to Applejack in 04. And another one I have an idea for, but that would take a few stories to get to. Glad you liked it.

Well, that was an interesting one. I think I'll have to read the main one.

“Yeah, but you were all depressed, and you thought you were going to have to sell your family legacy to survive. You know how the saying goes. ‘The only thing between a stallion and cheating on his mare is a few drinks and a wink.’ If she’d been at the right place at the right time…”

"Two things will be believed of any man under any circumstances and the other is that he has taken to drink." Booth Tarkington (in one of his "Penrod" stories).

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