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pandaxxus


rain's pouring but it never lasts <3

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This story is a sequel to Dash’s Little Big Secret


It’s been five years since Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh became a couple. It’s been five years since Applejack put their relationship in danger. It’s been the best five years of Rainbow Dash’s life. She and her boyfriend had spent so much time together over the past five years, and now that she is fresh out of college, she decides that they are ready to move in together!

It’s a big step, but the two both believe that the time is right. However, Sugar Belle, a young, beautiful, and sweet woman introduces herself and Rainbow’s neighbor and later discovers that Big Macintosh moved in as well. It turns out that both Big Mac and Sugar Belle have dated, and have a very special bond.

What does this mean for Rainbow?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 81 )

OMG ON MY BIRTHDAY GEE THIS IS SO EXCITING 💜💜💜♥️♥️♥️♥️ AND ITS AMAZING

Ah ha I new it would be better with a love rival, awesome begining dude, keep it up.

So far so good

Oooohh ho,ho,ho, this is going to be good a friendly love rival I like it. But I have up most confidence that Big Mac would never want to let her go, that what he said, as for Rainbow Dash she needs to stop thinking unconfined about Mac Leaving her for Belle. Bit this is going to be one heck of a love triangle over here. Im so excited, im ssoooo EXCITED!!!:raritystarry: Loving it already my friend. Keep up the great work.😉😎😃😁😄😊😋😉❤️❤️❤️❤️🌺🌸☘️🍀 (what do you think of my Rarity excited frase.

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This comment was amazing (including your Rariry phrase). Thank you! :scootangel:

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Thanks, and your welcome my friend, and good luck.

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Oh yeah by the way is Feather Bangs going to be in this story too? Cause I really like the episode of how he and big Mac fight for Sugar Belle, so I though that maybe Feather might try doing that to Rainbow just as Sugar Belle and him to so she could try and get Mac for herself again, Ooohh And Mac has to try and stop him from doing so. Or if it might not be Feather Bangs then maybe Dumbbell. So is it?

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I was thinking about adding him in when I thought of Sugar Belle and I think I might add him in sooner or later. Out of that whole season, I didn't watch the episode so I still have to watch it and get his character down before I write him in :rainbowlaugh:. And your idea is actually pretty cool, I might use it :duck:

I LOVE THIS SERIES SO MUCH AAAAA:rainbowwild:

An interesting start. I'll have to see how it goes. I have to admit that this set up makes me mildly nervous. It's a bit complicated as to why. All I can do is wait and see how all this turns out

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The idea of Sugar Belle asking Feather Bangs a plan to flirt Rainbow Dash into it, so Sugar Belle can try and Flirt with Big Mac to get him for herself, but Big Mac never backs down from it? Or maybe one of Rainbows friends witch I'm thinking maybe AppleJack might spy on Sugar Belle forming a plan with Feather and tacks matters into her own hooves.....i mean hands?

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https://youtu.be/0CGJjYm8yKo Here is the episode of MLP "Hard to say anything" hope this helps.

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THANK YOUUU
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I love the small reference with the song. And I'm glad you're interested! (And omg if you make the fanart, it would be amazing if you shared it)
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Yeah, I'm going down a weird path with this story, but I hope I won't disappoint :twilightoops:
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I really like your ideas, and thanks for the link!

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And if it helps i could give you more ideas to help you with some chapter trouble you might have, just ask me and i will give you as much ideas as possible, or if you have your own ideas I'm ok with it too, I do love your story. Oh and your welcome, I hike the video helps.and I know you won't disappoint me or any of the readers.

PLZZZZ CONTINUE, I'M ALREADY SO INTERESTED :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you again :scootangel:
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That would be very cool :twilightsheepish:
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IM GONNA UPDATE AS FAST AS I CAN I PROMISE

OMG! YASS! I’m so excited to read more! You have such an amazing talent for writing and capturing each characters personality perfectly. I can’t wait to read more chapters!:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

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Thank you so much omggg :twilightsheepish::rainbowkiss:

MJP

And Rainbow Dash STILL hasn’t received comeuppance for ruining everyone’s vacation and CRASHING A FUCKING YACHT

Do you need help panda

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I was a little stuck for a while but I’m back on track! (I think...)

Worth the wait

MJP

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Personally I think they should have left her stranded in the island

Don't worry I behave waited so long and so patiently for this to firm, and cI an understand that making story books can be hard and stuff really i. Know. And you have my support too for whatever you'll be doing for this week. Lots of good lucks and will be ready for the next one, cause this adventure of Love Triangle is about to get SSSWWWEEEEEEETTTT EPIC SPICY FUN!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Wow, I personally think she did pretty good in the special. She was right about the magic at least :rainbowlaugh:

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Aww thanks! I’m sorry I kept you waiting! Yea, I have a big big test this week and I have somewhere to go on Sunday, but maybe if I work hard enough I might be able to get it out soon! But I won’t be gone as long as before :twilightsmile:

MJP

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She Crashed a Yacht

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Don't worry about it my friend take all the time you need and I'll be waiting patiently for them chapters to come very soon. Plus I have my own story problems to deal with on Wattpad. Good luck.😋😋😋

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Technically it was the Storm King, Rainbow was too busy being stuck in the quicksand :rainbowlaugh:

comence count down till rainbow dash explodes or Sugar belle forces herself on big mac

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posible at the same time

Love reduces the proper function of neurons for 80% and that's scientifically proved.

Well I would say Rainbow is being over dramatic about it, but I guess its her first time feeling this way. But I do know Big Max can't not stop talking to her until he gets his answer from her. THEY NEED to talk SEROUS with eachother one way or another, salve things out too, but it seems like they are too stubborn to talk.

MJP

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Also I want someone to write a story where doctor shoves slaps ragamuffin for a flagrantly affensive accent that makes salesgenie ads look culturally accurate

Well here is my emotional break down from this chapter.
Saw new chapter, excited, read half way through, pulling hair, yelling in my mind, almost cried, and yelling at the end; "Grab her hand and talk ya dummy!!!"
Overall, it is still an amazing series to follow. And I recommend to keep at it! One of the best stories I've read for this shipping.
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P.s: barely read this chapter because I didn't know it was uploaded. Didn't get a notification.
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Thank you so much! I'm a hardcore MacDash shipper so I'm not letting this story die :rainbowlaugh:.

I have finals in school Coming so I won't have time to write :fluttercry: but afterwards I'll have the summer off! :scootangel:

I'm happy you are enjoying my story, comments like these keep me motivated :twilightsmile:

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With this kind of writing, and if I never heard of this site, I probably would have confused this for an actual storyline for the series. With that said, I hope you are considering becoming an author or script writer.
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I’ve always loved to write, Ive been writing my own stories since kindergarten and I’ve always had that dream of becoming an author. And really? I never thought my story would be that accurate ~:twilightsheepish:

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Even if the characters aren't together in the actual show, I would confuse it for an actual story from the show. It just feels that good of a story. And thats good. Never stop doing what you love!
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SKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSKSK-

I NEVER READ IT 'CAUSE I SHIP BIG MAC WITH SUGAR BELL AND DASH WITH SORIN. BUT, THIS, FAM...

THIS IS CA-KE-LY (I just created it a new word with 'cake' what-) AMAZIIIIIINNNNG!

I SMELL DRAMA-

imma stop talking (write?) now And just read the next chapter

YOU GUYS, NEED TO TALK, BRUH
















Great chapter, btw ^w^

They need to have a update

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