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totallynotabrony


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Shining Armor has a crush on the new girl at school.

His little sister Twilight thinks there's something wrong with this newcomer.

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Comments ( 13 )

Well...

That was...

Well...

10105115
Good, until it was odd.

Oh lord this is gonna be a ride, and I am definitely on board.

I would never have expected filly Twilight to be able to out-succ Cadence like that.

Lavacious, not sure if that's the word you were looking for. Lascivious seems to be more of what you were going for. Then again this story looks like it's going to be crack, maybe not.

Sigh...how predictable dull...Twilight as a child thinking that cadance`s sudden popularity and closeness with shining is demonic in origin no doubt due to jealousy issues.

The vacuum`s was unexpected though.

It be a bit cliche for Cadance to turn into a succubus for as a result of twilight`s actions.

Although I wanna suggest have Cadance turn out to be a different beast altogether I can't think of one that has the same effect on males as a succubus.

THE SUCC! WILL LAST! FOREVER!!!

10105289
I read this comment, then I see the E, then I am disappoint :derpytongue2:

10105492
You are correct; I fixed it.

"Who's sucking who now!?" Twilight shouted as the machine inhaled Cadance.

One WHOLE Cadence?

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