Every season, Rainbow, Pinkie, Twilight, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy get together for their Sleepover.
It's always a night filled with fun. Only, it's a night filled with... a lot of fun. Maybe a little too much fun.
And, believe it or not, by the end of the night...
Even Pinkie Pie just might admit it.
Big, big Special Thanks to Ninjadeadbeard, for putting up with my rough drafts, patiently editing through them, and, of course, for being wonderful friend.
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If it weren't for the fact that you write everyone so eloquently, I'd be lying if I said Pinkie wasn't the best thing EVER this time around!
I have a question for ya. When the fuck did Flurry Heart ever get in line for the sun? There was never a thing about Twilight ever passing the sun and moon down to anypony.
Plus Flurry has the Crystal Empire.
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That was the part that threw you? Not the whole, Rarity adopted a foal randomly thing?
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This whole story is a bucking mess of things I don't understand. But Flurry's was the one to stick out.
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I mean at least after learning she was going to die the youngest Alicorn made sense to inherit the sun at some point. Though to be fair, I think there's a point of them knowing a lot of things we don't, since this clearly some time in the future. Still, random Rarity foal adoption... with a name and description drop was like... Am I suppose to get this?
you had my interest, but now you have my full attention
Gotta feel for Pinkie the "coffee" bought out her manic depression seriously! Making her whip between moods quicker than she could keep up with.
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Heh, yeeaaah....
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I'm happy to hear that!
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Hey, thanks for taking the time to read! I'm sorry to hear you couldn't much get into the story, and that it was perplexing to you. Please know, your feedback is much appreciated!
Well, kind of long for my tastes as a one shot. But I enjoyed it.
Extremely in character and a ton of fun. I keep forgetting that gods could get mortals pregnant it's just strange for me to think of Shy and Discord having a child as the ending showed no kid but it's your story. Great job.
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Thanks very much!
I definitely understand not seeing children in Fluttershy's future, as the show really didn't give us any.
But, I also found the finale to be absolute sh!t. For my own sanity, I'ma pretend I never watched it. Gives me a lot more to work with... like Flutterbaby!
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Never a problem and completely agree but for me I always hated Pinkie and Cheese together and much prefer Pinkie and Discord so that's what I go for. Other then that the ending was not bad.
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Well, I'm all over FlutterCord, not gonna lie. But that's not so much the show's doing as it is writing's doing.
Pinkie x Cheese... yeah, I'm not against the ship, but I'm also not likely to go writing an entire story around it. Cheese (Sr.) is simply too... underdeveloped, I guess. He's more or less the male Pinkie.
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I understand completely. I get why it's so huge. I'm not against the pairing just not in love with it as I once was with how different their personalities are. But that's just me. You're right about Cheese. I never cared about him myself.
I kinda want to know what Rainbow’s regret is