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Hmmmmmmmmmmm.

Interesting.

Hey there, i am the artist of that pic your using as a header. It was done as a commission and the commissioner wants it to be for his own story so i ask you please to change it. Also give credit next time if you take someone elses Art.

EmpressBridle

>orgy''s
>large breast

looks promising.

9920765
Will do i am so sorry if i made you mad

9920765
Who commissioned the pic?

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The commissioner just pointed it out. Just please credit art you take for your stories. Its sadly a common thing which i have seen from all around fimfic.

The summary reminds me of https://www.fimfiction.net/story/438772/at-her-kings-service, but with Spike instead of Shining Armor. I don't find that a negative; I'm curious to see how it goes and/or diverges.

From bad to good ratings. Okay this will go in my read later list

9921078
Hmm funny I found that story after the idea for this fic came to me....

There are some similarities but there will definitely be some differences.

9920772
Right? I keep seeing stories in my feed that have awesome premises, and I keep getting psyched before I realize that it's this guy and that they'll be unreadable.

Comment posted by Deergenerate deleted Oct 5th, 2020

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well, I can say if you feel you can do better than me, Have fun put your money where your mouth is.

That depends on which female would either resist only to fall to pleasure, willingly offer themselves to him, or can be used to make them atone?

I guess I'll leave some thoughts on this. I like the premise of the story and what can come of it, but there are obvious problems with this. As harsh as it's going to sound, you need an editor on this. You need to look back through this after you've written it and read it out loud to hear just what in the fuck you've written.

This is tagged as porn, which is meant to evoke arousal and such while being read. That doesn't work when the plethora of errors rip a reader out of any immersion though. I'm trying to think of something to compare it to... a fine wine in a sippy-cup? A five star meal placed on a Whinny The Pooh plate? You get what I'm saying? I like the premise and all it promises to be, but I can't take it seriously with all the errors that leave me seeing red correctional ink.

I wish you the best of luck with this, I really do. I hope to come back to it when it updates and see some major improvements.

~SolidFire

So another story where Spike suddenly gets bigger and fucks some girls who become devoted to him because he good at sex even though he never had any sexual experiences before cause his cock is bigger than average.

deep puncher marks

It should be "puncture marks"

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My bad I'll fix it when i get home tonight when im off work

Dammit doesn't include ember LAME 💢😒

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Sorry While i'm not aganst Ember in smut in general I didn't think of her when I commissioned this just the (Spoilers for who gets bonded to Spike) M6,CMCs , Luna and Celestia

That’s what happens when a tornado meets a volcano

It would be interesting if we discover Starlight's true reasin for this is that she wants to cinfess to Spike, but he needs to be bigger so that Starlight wouldnt be accused of being a cradle robber...

Talk about Perfect timing.

Now Spike can have a threeway with Applebloom and Applejack.

Nice. So it looks like who ever spike claims he gets their mark on his back. I wonder who else will be added. Also I wonder if somehow his will spread so SPike's Harem will grow without him actually having to get involved.

Anyway, for next choice, I say go for Pinkie and Mrs Cake. Then let poniville enjoy dragon iced cupcakes.

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I can agree with that. Mrs. Cake and Pinkie with Spike in a threesome would be perfect. Also, I didn't expect Applebloom to be such a slut in this chapter. But I ain't complaining.

Got to ask. There a reason Applebloom was just totally into the sex like that.

9985839
No way to MS Cake. She's married and has children.

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I don’t think Spike cares about that. In fact he may even see it as a threat to his new hoard.

9987717
because Applebloom is a horny Mare in this world and down hold country, Also a rebellion phase where she wants to just piss Big mac off, But i call it Kelly Bundy syndrome XD

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Hmm, ok. Still, seems kinda weak that she would just disobey her sister like that and be totally into the sex right from the get go.

What story was the Doctor talking about? I think I remember reading a fic where he was cloped to death by Starlight and regenerated into a ginger.
Does any pony have the name of that fic?

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Spike and the lustful lamp and the end of milf club

I think I’ve seen that cover art before. Also, you never mentioned there was going to be foalcon. Please add it into your tags or something.

10008978
No foal con all characters are over 18

I hope the spell doesn't get broken Spike has been through enough in the actual show. Now is the time for him to claim every woman as his own. Just like the Dragon that he was always meant to be.

This chapter was strange and not good for me when I read that Rarity fucks Spike with vibrator. He must be dominating and make mares his sluts and slaves not opposite

Good chapter, We seen Applejack and Applebloom will we see Sweetie bell,

Even though this chapter was about Spike and Rarity, I think Sweetie Belle should get her chance at Spike too. I admittedly confessed I teared up a little at the rejection--all that work for her crush to see her, just to witness her crush after her sister...:fluttercry:

Gotta say, not really a fan of femdom

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