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Universal Librarian


Just a tired Welshman with a penchant for writing. You can also catch me on TikTok! Now with added Ko-Fi!

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Oh Sunburst career! Not only we get to know just what he did, I hope we can get a hefty epilogue/sequel with this life meeting his next one :rainbowwild:

Oh the perfection that was Cards Against Starlight. These spinoffs are going to be great. Only helps that this is a Sunburst lewd fic, there's not enough of the good geeky boi

Behold - the power of being ths Sick and Twisted Sunburst!

Oh boy, I'm here and this is great so far!

Well this story is off to a good start, I have been waiting for a very long time for a good Colt-toy Sunburst story even better with a Theastral who is going to Dom him; at least that's what I hoping for. I am looking forward to see how this is going to pan out for him, like if this is going to affect his public image or academic status (despite apparently flunking CSoGU). I wonder how he is going to still stay meek after all of this until he meets Starlight again or if this is going to be an alternative universe and things are going to be very different for him later down the road? I would love to see him as a bottom in this relationship, with bondage gags and dildos gallor. So is this all just a show or due he have to also 'service' ponies as well at this new job?

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I'm pretty much playing by ear for now, though I won't be putting in any non-con or extreme fetishes like scat.

If I can keep it going I'm planning on having the story go right up until Sunburst leaves for the Crystal Empire, with a potential sequel showing what he gets up to until Starlight hunts him down

...I didn't think he was serious.

Not suprised he got into bondage. Us quiet geeks are usually the kinky ones lol

Ah, it's finally here!
How long till he ends up in the middle of an orgy filling and being filled multiple ways at the same time, I wonder?

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Aw, that was really sweet. I really enjoy the dynamic there, of the professional and the amateur performing in front of an audience.

You know, I don't think I ever commented on the in-universe oddity that he managed to get the exact three cards he needed to describe something that actually happened to him. Harmony works in strange ways... (Out-of-universe, he had those three cards and you decided to make it A Thing, but let's not go to Doylism, 'tis a silly place.)

Nice to see an update on this, I can't wait to see how this will shape up. I am hopping for a lot of Femdom in this one, with Sunburst not having a say on anything and just becoming her obedient little pet. I wonder if his studies will be affected in some way by all of this?


Looking forward to text time

Lol... Thats all i have to say

If you're willing to take requests, I'd love to see some watersports~
Or, if that's too much, some face fucking would be great 💜

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I'm afraid watersports is a little out of my pay grade, but facef**king is definitely on the table for later chapters

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Superb! Hopefully it's mutual between them? Something about the desperate grinding of the groin on a muzzle and the equally enticing glk! sounds of horsecock penetrating a throat are just mmm~

the safe-word is oranges.
Oooh mine is avocado.

Come on everybody else, I wanna know what's your safe word?

I will look for to seeing more! You are starting to become one of my favorite authors on the site.

Dan

Lovely. I still say Sunburst and Moondancer are perfect for eachother.

Proving that often, so often the best sex organ is a clever mind.

Woof - something good this year!

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Especially if you happen to be a unicorn and can put those ideas to direct use.

"When there's more than one of us in here they knock first, just in case we're fucking."

This is a lot less common than you might expect among people who fuck for a living, but it's still a good general practice.

"Mine's oranges, remember?"

"I remember," Sunburst replied. "It's a pretty good one, I can't imagine that being something I'd usually shout during, er, activities."

"I'd hope not,"

Fun fact: the fruit actually came first, and the color is named after it. Sunburst might even be nerdy enough to know this.

Darkstar smirked. "Like I've said before, most ponies don't let us thestrals put our fangs anywhere near their bits, so none of us are really any good at blowjobs." She planted a hoof on Sunburst's chest. "Now that we've got a stallion who's crazy enough to enjoy that sort of thing, well, I think we should get some practice in."

You forgot the evil laugh.

The walls were entirely made intricately carved mahogany

made of

"Did you know? A lot of the ponies in the audience heard about you letting a bat-pony put their fangs near your pride and they want to see it for themselves. Shall we prove them wrong?"

Uh... wrong on what?

this is good, i would like to see more of this

Noice, would love to see more. It lives after a year!

Now I'm just waiting for Sunburst to take up Starlight on the offer she made with that one note she gave him during Cards Against Equestria. XD

I like these characters. they remind me of some people i know :twilightsheepish:

It lives and it's sexy and glorious!

You might want to avoid using vulgar slang in the prose all the time, if/or not at all, just to avoid falling onto the same path so many other clop writers have. Just some constructive criticism on my part.

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I try to avoid it where possible, but there's only so many different synonyms for 'wang'.

Given their occupation I don't think they would really have a sex life outside of work. I mean, their sex life is pretty much on stage, given how many gigs they have each day wouldn't their relationship outside of work be less...physical? I don't know, that's just my head cannon.

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Well, there’s man/stallionhood, maleness, erection, length, tool, shaft, organ, or simply penis.

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I mentioned this a chapter or two ago, that sex workers don't have as much non-work sex as people like to imagine them having. Of course, these sex workers are sex workers we're imagining so I didn't particularly care...

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Very true, but note that Popsicle mentions at the start of the chapter that he and Darkstar are the only performers who hang out outside of work, and that they hardly ever do anything work-related (i.e. sex) together outside of work.

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This is semi-work related though, remember? Half the reason Sunburst's there is because he's willing to be their practice partner for something most stallions won't go for. Half bang with some buddies, half hang with them!

And considering their both thestrals, both could end up involving harnesses. :-P

Comment posted by Firestar141232 deleted Jun 21st, 2021

Sunburst just nodded, not quite willing to trust his own voice again yet.

it is amazing he ever trusted it.:facehoof:

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As Batman once said. "This (pointing to forehead) will get you out of more trouble than this (pointing to utility belt) ever could."

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Oh you would be surprised at the number is synonyms for it.

Hoping to see this continue one day

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