Armed with the Crown of Grover and Clover the Clever's Cloak, Gallus and Sandbar fight giant spiders to save their friends from danger.
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I'm kinda tired, so I blame that, but at a glance, I thought the character tags included "Giant Spider", but it was just Gallus and Sandbar. For a second, I was wondering just what the hell I had missed in MLP.
Anyway, I'm gonna get around to reading this later, but I'm hyped for it.
Edit: That was fantastic, as expected. The crown was such a great thing to tie the action and adorable bonding together.
At least giant.
Not a big fan of anything having to do with spiders, but having seen the advertisements for a certain old film, I can't help but imagine one of the characters yelling "Get back, YOU EIGHT LEGGED FREAKS!"
That was a really fun and engaging read! Where to start...
I loved the use of the artifacts. I think that the griffon crown's power was especially well thought out--it makes absolute historical sense as to why Grover was so great, and here it got to be a sweet, romantic way for Gallus to bond with Sandbar. I really, really, really want to read more about the whole Student Six using the magic of their various cultural artifacts, so I hope you do more on that.
The action elements were really great. The injuries were properly worrisome, and I could see them make all the acrobatic moves based on the descriptions. (I will say I'm not sure I tracked exactly how the coup de grace move above/below the web actually happened, but the end result was satisfying, anyway.) I thought it was interesting that the "little" spiders were highly flammable while the big one used fire magic. Seems like a poor survival trait to give your offspring.
The little peck of a kiss! 😘 So sweet!
As always, your descriptions of scent are superb.
Hrm
Shelob been having more kids.
Now shelob herself? Damn.
Sound advice.
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That was a great movie but I don't think it was that old unless we're thinking of two separate movies.
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It was from 2002. That's almost half my lifetime ago, so that's old enough for me. 😅
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Oh we were thinking of the same one I just thought it came out later than that. it's a hilarious movie. It was on Syfy last week.
Boy this was a pretty epic story and gallus and sandbar Are pretty awesome together as a team Specially the artifact they have on them 😀 Awesome job with the story
Adorable and fantastical and gosh can I please get a sequel sequel sequel this one is so good. High fantasy, lovely prose, good queer romance, adventure-romance blending, and giant spiders are almost everything I could ask for. You know how to write these precious kiddos as explicitly heartwarming and implicitly so.
Obviously, GallBarYona is everything I could ask for in a Young Six story, but I'll take half of that.
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Awwww! I promise if I ever feel inclined to do something similar to this again you'll be the first to know
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feed me your sweet, sweet gay horse words and tell me I'm handsome ily semil
your prose is very good shit 👌 👌 👌 👌 👌
To the author - the whole first half feels a video game
middle section is the flashback bit right?
final part is perfection & funny with smolder smacking the griffon, lol
Eyes, nuts (if applicable), ears, joint areas(like elbow, knee, collar bone, ect), and kidneys, are all extremely vulnerable areas for any living thing.