This story is a sequel to After-Thoughts, or How to Express Yourself in a Way that Makes Sense
Following a horrendous Guardian/Teacher conference between Grampa Gruff and (The Great and Powerful) Student Counselor Trixie, Gallus wonders what to do next, and where he truly belongs in Equestria. If he belongs there anyway.
Which is made more difficult when trying to be gay covertly with his boyfriend.
Follows Season 9, Episode 20: A Horse Shoe-In.
Cover art is drawn by, uh, "6jjcgf0d1etqx1tp" on Derpibooru. Or gd_inuk. I am unsure.
I didn't mean to base my story on it, but it ended up being perfect for me anyway.
Normally I'm GallusxSilverstream... But I will not deny that this was touching.
Good work đ
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it despite the pairing.
I'm really excited to see where this goes! I really enjoyed their cuddle session, and I hope we get to see more sweetness in the coming chapters.
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Haha, I hoped so too!
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Hey, just wanted to tell that i like this story sooo much. Good luck with future works!
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That means a lot to me.
Thank you very much.
This whole series has been a whirlwind of good gay awesome. I really hope there are more installments. I stopped watching the show quite a bit before the Young Six stepped into the story (I stopped watching regularly around season six and barely touched anything after). Despite, this I've found a lot of good stories about these characters, and no matter how unfamiliar they are to me, I can tell there's a lot of quality in these. Some very great gays you've got here.
So, as I went back to give this a re-read, I noticed something you might want to consider editing. The acronyms of WLW and MLM just don't work for ponies because they lack women and men. While MLM could reasonably exist as a phrase for them, it would end up meaning mares loving mares, and last time I checked neither Gallus or Sandbar fit the definition of a lesbian/bi girl/etc in-story. I'd have it as FLF (females loving females) if you really wanted to preserve the MLM in order to change the implied definition to 'male' instead of 'men'. Or, I would suggest just replacing both abbreviations with Stallions-loving-Stallions and Mares-loving-Mares in the text. I think that FLF and MLM would be more fitting for general use that's species-inclusive.
I really like this story . Good luck with your future works . â¤
as bad a time as Gallus is having, glad Trixieâs in this! she is the best
aww too adorable!
oof, poor Gallus!
and oof!
hehe very Gallus to try that
at least Gallus knows what heâs doing when it comes to coping mechanisms!
ah so that explains Gallusâs default facial expression!
love that she inexplicably has a PhD, love this entire note, really just love it
hey thatâs just like the meme!
that is indeed an unsettled question
guessing Trixie just dumped her entire wagonâs contents into her office, love her
that makes him even more Cool Kid! i say, as a responsible and boring adult
most Trixie apology, i can just hear her nasal voice, love it
ooh, love this worldbuilding! that griffons are meaner to people with birthdays than usual
definitely Gallusâs style!
aww yay!
nice
aww i am sad that the gazebo in the Ponyville town park is in such a state :(
and oof, it is worrying when Sandbar does it!
hehe nice
now just what is going on here?
ah that would explain Sandbar being so weird! i always forget what can happen with a Changeling around
that would indeed explain all sorts of weird things that have happened in Ponyville without causing a commotion among the townsponies
hehe it sure does something to how emotions are depicted in a narrative with a species that has the ability to literally read them like a Geiger counter
now just what is going on here?
ooh, perspective switch!Â
oof! relatable pony moment
aww that is a fun fact!
and of course Chekovâs poster tube will surely come into the plot in this final chapter!
ahaha love it!Â
and Pinkie Pieâs classroom being unused and empty from earlier allowing this to happen, good job in bringing together all these elements!
theyâre just not as chill as the ponies where Sandbar is from!
good ol Yona, love her
and augh, sad that even among his best friends Gallus canât give a cute nuzzle
well if Ms. Rarity says it it must be true!
ahaha a perfect way for the poster tube to reappear
aww that is our Gilda!
oh i absolutely love this backstory! there is a specificity and a banality here that really adds texture to these characters in a way that is all too rarely seen
aww as he should! but only for a moment
ahaha love it, very Gilda
aww, yay!Â
on the surface itâs a cute little slice-of-life fluff story as i expected, but i am also impressed by the structure undergirding it, with all of the elements in the previous chapters coming together in this one. it feels very much like a television sitcom episode in fic form. great stuff!