This story is a sequel to The Moon Student and the Sun Student
Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer grew into adult mare. When Luna and Celestia ask their students to go to Ponyville to check the preparations for the Summer Sun Celebration. But when the festival begins, doesn't happen as they expected.
Background belongs to Emberfiremane
Twilight Sparkle vector belongs to Thatguy
Sunset Shimmer vector belongs to Paulysentry
Daybreaker vector belongs to Askometa
Nightmare Moon vector belongs to Askometa
Chapters (7)
Decent start
Good chapter, although Sunset needs more lines
Two chapters in one day? You sir, are a legend.
Wow, didn't expect the girls to get arrested, that's new.
Heya Star, I found this error in this sentence
Mistaken gender, my friend. Stiil, great job on the 2 chapters today.
you forgot rarity
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Sorry
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sorry. I already corrected
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Its ok, just a simple quick fix
3 chapters in one day!? Slow down, my friend!
Interesting new twist to have Twilight & Sunset both brainwash as well as the side effect of them hating each other of it. I have a feeling this side effect is gonna backfire on Nightmare Moon & Daybreaker.
Also, I found another small error
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Oh. Thanks
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Welcome
One down, another to go. Worth the wait!
This getting an update?
Daybreaker looked at Twilight Sparkle, "Celestia is not my name anymore. I am Daybreaker!"
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It's Fixed it
Nightmare Moon looked at Sunset Shimmer and smiled.
"Well, well, well. At least somepony here recognizes me. But I'm afraid Luna is not my name anymore, call me Nightmare Moon."
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Fixed it
will this is updated?
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Yes, but only when I have an idea of what the next chapter might be like
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okay. Maybe I can help with thinking of ideas?
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I have a written draft not ready yet.
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ah. i see
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Hello! Nice work!