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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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This story is a sequel to The Fall of Princess Celestia


With Daybreaker's banishment about to be over in a few years, Luna needs somepony to be the hero to save her corrupted sister. Luna sees the potential of Twilight Sparkle and decides to make her student. Will Twilight Sparkle be loyal to Luna or will she become rebellious?
Background belongs to Magister39: https://www.deviantart.com/magister39/art/Canterlot-Throne-Room-550262042
Twilight Vector belongs to CloudyGlow: https://www.deviantart.com/cloudyglow/art/Twilight-Sparkle-is-a-little-angry-410444446

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 19 )

Amazing story. But can you please capitalize the F in ‘fall’? It’s really annoying me. :twilightsheepish: Not trying to be rude.

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Yeah, I wanted to enjoy this but it didn't really feel like twilight and Luna in this story to me either.

Nice job tying the comics and series in

Nice job! I feel like Twilight and Luna could have used some fleshing out to match what they would have said while in the 'Fall' comic, but this is not bad. :)

Why was this updated without being told? :applejackunsure:

9586274
Look, I don't know if you read the rewritten chapter 2, but I said in chapter 2 I was going to do a rewrite of the story, but only chapter 1 was going to continue the same

9587346
You should have blog that info for those who remove this story fron their tracking list

We know what happens after this. Twilight goes into the human version of Canterlot, and causes trouble.

Twilight Sparkle smiled a little. If making friends would make Luna happy she would try to do it for Luna.

Since we were told in the first chapter that Twilight's full name was Twilight Sparkle, you could just call her Twilight for the rest of the story.

“The spell of an object becomes another object”, replied Luna.

Could also be called Transfiguration.

Twilight Sparkle - Sunset Shimmer
Princess Luna - Princess Celestia

I'am right?

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