Peaceful Repose

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A pony wakes up in a strange room chained to a bed, with a princess who needs his help.

An entry into the Nightmare Night in April: Horror Write-Off contest.

Pre-read by UV Unicorn Laser and Regidar.

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SockPuppet

SockPuppet #1 · Apr 15th, 2019 · · ·

Holy flaming horse apples!

That was great!

Regidar

Regidar #2 · Apr 16th, 2019 · · ·

Absolutely stellar, you held my interest in the romance while stringing along the undertones at the plot’s heart (as it were)

dexter Rarity when

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #3 · Apr 16th, 2019 · · ·

Mmm

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #4 · Apr 16th, 2019 · 3 · ·

And this is why it's fundamentally unethical to ship Raritwi.

I kid, I kid. Excellent tale of love driving someone to desperation. Best of luck in the judging!

SomberRose

SomberRose #5 · Apr 17th, 2019 · · ·

Fascinating. I am both horrified, and extremely pleased.

fourths

fourths #6 · Apr 21st, 2019 · 5 · ·

"Willing to turn partner into a vampire to cheat death without consent" is a red flag.

Undome Tinwe

Undome Tinwe #7 · Apr 21st, 2019 · 3 · ·

9579751
It's not true love unless you're willing to deprive your partner of their bodily autonomy and brainwash them into murdering people.

Orbiting Kettle

Orbiting Kettle #8 · Apr 26th, 2019 · 3 · ·

Ah, such a dreamy romance. Clearly a healthy and wonderful relationship.

Great story, thank you for writing it.

NaiadSagaIotaOar

NaiadSagaIotaOar #9 · Aug 14th, 2019 · · ·

This was interesting! I liked the general voice of the narration, especially the first paragraph--that moment of hypothesis-induced obliviousness was a great way to make Twilight feel like herself even with everything else that was going on here.

But what I think I liked most is how the story pushed aside the less interesting part--Twilight having a pony strapped down in a room somewhere--for the more interesting part--why Twilight's doing it in the first place.

Thanks for writing, this was a nice read

TGM

TGM #10 · Jan 14th, 2020 · · ·

Good stuff, the narration choice is a little jarring (I'm not used to dialogue without quotation marks) but it fits the tone you were going for excellently.

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