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Struggling to edit and write, and starting to read.

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Luna has requested a private meeting with Princess Twilight Sparkle under specific circumstances. In the dead of a dark, cloudy night, they venture into the tunnels beneath Canterlot's castle.


Expanded from my second-place entry into the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting group Panic! Fiction "Princess" Contest. The contest simply required that we use any canon Princess.

I know the [Adventure] tag may seem a little odd after first reading, but it was probably the closest I could get to how it all turned out.

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“Former”?
A thumbs down for you.

I know the [Adventure] tag may seem a little odd after first reading, but it was probably the closest I could get to how it all turned out.

What do you mean by that?

Not bad, not bad at all. I do agree that the Adventure tag does feel a bit odd, but this was a nice short story.

A thumbs up and a favorite for you.

10321686
What a shame! Come on guys, we better write as many post season nine stories as we can until he can find one that impresses him! Let’s get to work, we can’t have this man upset like this!

10321688

It wasn't Slice of Life, there's not a Mystery to solve, there's no real Drama or Romance underneath things (at least to me). Adventure (given that Twilight was exploring how to gain the ability to Dreamwalk and experiencing that on her own for the first time) just seemed the best fit.

10321686

I was trying establish a timeline in the description, to say that the story takes place after the series finale and Twilight's coronation. I hope you'll give it a chance at least, knowing that.

10321756
Don’t. If it’s related to S9, its sucks. You want me to cheer up? Help me find a way to metaphorically grab Hasbro by the balls and make them revise the entire season with writers like McCarthy, Rogers and Larson, bring disgruntled fans like myself on to approve their work, and scrub all traces of the original and its related material from canon and the media.

10322012

I see. I've asked them to declare everything accept Season Nine as non-canon and rename Season Nine as Season One, thereby making it the only season. They said they'd consider it. I hope this helps! :)

Comment posted by Jade Dawn deleted Jul 8th, 2020

This was a great expansion of an already good piece, Flash. I loved the added dreamwalking scenes. Nice job.

Another nice short story.
When you reead it, with every line of text, it feels like mystery comes from it, every second, without a stop: during travel through tunnels beneath Canterlot, duering Luna's speech, during ritual walk through dreams... It feels so great, well done! :D

I hope that Dreamwalker wasn't Shadowwalker though... :O

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