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Hatch opens, stark light

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All Celestia wanted to do was give Luna the perfect Hearth's Warming. It's too bad that she forgot the most important part.


This was written for Pen Stroke as a part of Jinglemas 2019!

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Cover art by Dahtamnay.

Thanks to _Moonshot for editing.

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Comments ( 6 )

This was a nice look at Celestia and Luna's first post-NMM Hearth's Warming. It was cute seeing Celestia get so caught up preparing, Luna getting angry made sense, and the ending was sweet.

Thanks for a warm story that raised me mood

This is lovely. I love the dynamic here, even if I'm totally on Luna's side. Celestia should know better, but it's in-character for her not to. Just ask your sister what she wants for once in your life, Sunbutt.

The image of Luna growing back into her former self is hilarious. The grumpiness helped sell it.

Wolk #5 · Jun 26th, 2020 · · 4 ·

i don't like it, it's weird

Hi! This was reviewed here! Thanks for picking me as a reviewer and I hope you found what I had to say helpful. Deuces!

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