Contrails/Haunted Places/Refuge

Soarin took a deep breath, and then took the plunge.

An entry to the May 2021 Pairings Contest.

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The Red Parade

The Red Parade #1 · Jun 1st, 2021 · 3 · 1 ·

This was so great and wholesome, I love the dynamic you had and how naturallly everything came into place! The characterizations were rich and full and I loved how strong each vocing was! Plus I loved how Soarin’s struggles felt so realistic, coupled with the desire to break out of the repetition of daily life and ik glad Joe could help him take that plunge. Great work!

wishcometrue

wishcometrue #2 · Jun 1st, 2021 · 3 · 1 ·

God, I love this one. It's just so sweet and tender and real, and the buildup to the ending makes it so satisfying. Great work, Seer.

TheLegendaryBillCipher

TheLegendaryBillCipher #3 · Jun 29th, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

Wholesome, sweet stuff, Seer. As warm and fluffy as a freshly-made doughnut. Great work.

Ice Star

Ice Star #4 · Jul 30th, 2021 · 3 · 1 ·

This was just so filled with warm, sweet fluff. A perfect light read.

Parker

Parker #5 · Jul 31st, 2021 · 2 · 1 ·

Beautiful. Soarin's anxiety is authentic and well crafted as the story weaves the threads of his public and private worries together. Keeping that feeling constant between scenes of rushing air and quiet diner moments is quite a feat. And I loved the ritualistic plunge to open each scene - how it turned prose almost to poetry or song.
A sweet and satisfying read, and one I will definitely revisit to read again.

Thrawn1800