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Undome Tinwe

And I'll always find you, again and again/And I'll love every version of you/And you're never truly gone/As long as a part of you in me lives on.


Flurry Heart hosts a chess tournament for her hoof in marriage. Cozy Glow intends to win on her own terms.

Winner of the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting FlurryGlow contest.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 35 )

Ooh, this looks like it’ll be fun. Also I’m always a sucker for any story that gets the Trio out of that statue.

Something-something Vegeta’s pride as a Saiyan reference here. Actually Speed Racer too come to think of it. I think it’s broadly a Japanese cultural thing.

The comics established that Cadance is capable of wheels-within-wheels planning on a level that rivals Celestia, albeit usually put to far more obviously beneficent ends (like reuniting Tempest with one of her foalhood friends). I see it passed to her daughter too.

D’awww. This was cute.

Don’t suppose you’re a fan of Star Trek: the Next Generation? If you are then you probably know the Data scene I’m thinking of from Season 2. This chapter reminded me of it.

Did I miss a reference?

"Then I guess we're at an impasse," Flurry replied.

"I guess we are," Flurry seethed.

small typo

plot twist: double surrender

...aaaaaaaaaaaaaand I'll just go ahead and add this to the Chess group now. :V

Ultimately it's just sweet and I love it. Flurry and Cozy seemed to have a lot of fun together near the end. they really do ship this two quite a lot.

Comment posted by M_A_D_C_A_T_S deleted Mar 17th, 2022

As always, I love the way you write Flurry and Cozy. This is a really fun set up, and you explore it really well. Them competing to lose at the end was a neat twist.

Oh yeah, I love this shipping.

and so Cozy opened by moving her king's pawn forward. Flurry responded with queen's bishop's pawn

Sicilian or Caro-Kann? Come on, these details are important!

Ahhh yes, more of this ship.

I love the naming scheme of these chapters, and while not having very much knowledge of this ship, I’m excited to see how it plays out.

This was a very cute story. I love that at the end they both ended up trying to throw the game. I love how you write these two, and I look forward to possibly reading more.

Easily the most wholesome Flurryglow I've read. Brilliant dramatic arc and grand reveal. Thank you for it.

this story is fantastic, unfortunately 2. Ke2

what a nice story

Flurry sighed. "I guess that's why you're the chessmaster, I guess," she said, pushing her king over.

"I guess" is repeated where it shouldn't be. Either change it to "That's why you're the chessmaster, I guess," or "I guess that's why you're the chessmaster''

Just offering some friendly suggestions, not criticizing. And actually...

This was the 2nd best FlurryGlow story I ever read in my life and that's saying a lot. I've read TONS of FlurryGlow stories, but this one really caught my eye. It was wonderful. Amazing job! :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

Fixed, thanks! Also curious what your #1 is. Mine's absolutely Aquaman's And I Hope You Die but if there's another good one I'd love to read it.

I haven't read "I Hope You Die" yet... but my favorite is currently "Run Away With Me"

Oh, that one is incredible too.

Man Vegeta would be a great MLP villain. He's got the ridiculous ego.

Short, sweet, wholesome with characters who can have thier cake and eat it too. Magnificent story!

Added bonus I got to see a Speed Racer video with a hilarious comments section.

This is perfection. :D

Mastermind x Mastermind FlurryGlow is a dynamic I didn't know I'd absolutely adore as much I as I do. My only peeve with the story is that the first two moves on the chapters don't align with the picture

Also I love how both your fencing stories and now this chess story align perfectly with when I get super into the subject lol

That calmed Cozy. "Fine." Her grin returned as wrapped a foreleg around her beloved.

I believe there's a typo here?

This was an excellent read. I loved the way Cozy was offended when denied her change to prove herself and then I loved more the way Flurry came up with a plan to truly test Cozy without risking it will. Really good read and chemistry between them, this is easily my favourite crackship and this is now one of my fave fics of it.

This is adorable.

Short. Sweet. Adorkable. Well done, and congrats on the win yourself!

Took the words right outta my mouth

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