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Please utilize dinosaurs correctly because to many stories don't. They are meant to be great beast that are effectively a force of nature. No non-venomous creature can take a medium sized one a and up. The small ones are fair game tho

Why would ponies have anything against Faunus? They have literal physically anthromorphic species on that planet.

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"I like dinosaurs, so no one should be able to beat them unless they're even bigger and cooler than the dinosaur is." Said no one on the magical planet of monster-slaying magically-inclined equine heroes in a story crossover where the main character is a magical monster-slaying hero of a different kind.

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I never said that and that is putting words in my mouth. I'm just saying most dinosaur stories suck because of one reason or another.

Dinosaurs are animals. If you prove yourself to dangerous to them they will leave you alone. With some exceptions.

OK this is the third time iv tried to read this fic can you please finish this one thank you

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I like to think of the whole 'Third time the charm' thing... also my co-writer is making angry faces at me at me so this is last one.

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good to here i liked the first one to be honest let hope that it all go's well thank you for your work

I like the story so far

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Ah, thanks for that :)

“I've come to enroll two of my granddaughters”. You got my attention. Nice twist, but I am calling it now the other granddaughter is Co.

Pleas tell me that the ice fox I the photo is suppose to be sylth... I miss her

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Sorry for asking this, I have a bad memory with somethings... Who's Sylth?

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She is the grim fox that was rescued and taken in by Viri in your fist story Molten fox. U gave her the ability to breath ice and she was also white instead of black like Normal grim. And I most likely misspelled her name

And I checked and I did spell it’s name wrong it is Sylph

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Oh Sylph!... Hmmm... Writing idea down

Cant wait for the next one great story

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Also note: It really sucks if you are editing a chapter and the website says 'Ha! NOPE!' and then I have to redo it all again... Rip

Ouch

Quite

It's Quiet

Ouch... but I hope there is more coming soon

Please don't give up on this one.

Okay im finally up to date with this fic and hoping it doesn’t get canned like the other two version. And im happy to see that the story is moving at a better pace than the first and second one, now im hoping that when we get to Equestria the fic doesnt Lose
Focus like the first one because that version it feels like it doesnt belong that much in fim fiction cause
The ratio of pony and not pony arcs was like 70% notpony 30%pony (aka how many arcs or the fic
Centered in Equestria) the second one feels even less but i think its cause it got canned before the cast could make it there, the pace of the prologue and remmant arc was a lot slower so it simply didnt reach the Equestria centric part but still reading this third version i feel like the pace its not so fast that stuff doesn’t sink in and that it isnt slow enough to feel like its going nowhere. Another think that i hope it doesnt happen are the deux ex machina that the grandma and aunt(i think it was) pull, i know that thy are god or technical god but it felt in those moments like Viri didnt do anything to change how it played out and she is the PWOTAGONIST, i feel that the second version sidestepped that but again that version was canned before that problem presented itself, and finally i want to send my love for molten fox (and all its versions) cuz i really enjoy reading them i like Viri (even tho sometimes i feel her character doesnt shine much) and i would like to see more of it, also the idea of initiating a faunus revolution in Equestria will always intrigue me even if the original version handwaved the issue of te changs that Viri brought. Still i love this fics and i hope to see more adventures of Viri the Mozilla Firefox. :heart: :trollestia: :trollestia: :yay: :yay: :heart:

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Yang has an interesting family, doesn’t she?

Yeah, but I think Viri wins the Prize for the craziest

Bloodborne, an excellent horror JRPG

I am interested to see Ruby's father reaction to see his brother

YA!!!!!!!! Sylph BACK!!!!!! Let the adorable rule of the ice fox began!

saw her holding a butter knife between her teeth. Clenches chest and falls over. Form out of nowhere the words Fatality winner Sylph is heard.

All the old couples are here with the exception being Ruby and Viri

It's Remnant. If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

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It would probably be what you said, I just Really Suck as spelling some words. Remnant is one of them... I don’t know why.

Comment posted by Randompegasus168 deleted Sep 20th, 2019
Comment posted by Randompegasus168 deleted Sep 20th, 2019

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

Viri, you should be careful, you should stop sneezing new people into reality

If she sneezed them into existence, does that mean they could classify as her children?

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I think so, from what I understood they are more like her creations

And this story it's still alive :D

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I'm confused... What does that have to do with assigning voice actors to the OCs of this story?

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He just commented on the misspelling, I don't think he saw the part about voice acting

“Maybe, bit wouldn't you want to meet other kids? Make friends?” Sara asked before adding. “Head down.”

Thats the last thing kids want todo all the asshole kids? They just multiplay by the hundreds

“Umm… Amber.” I answered Grandma who blinked at this. “I like it.” I added as the puppy yipped at this. I smiled brightly at this before having the puppy face me. “No peeing inside, bad Amber, bad.” This caused the puppy to whine a bit and have her ears flatten on top of her head… just… too… cute!

Ill have you know that is not how dogs act when being told bad. In most cases they will continue being happy adorable pieces of.

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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Don't know if this story will get another chapter, mostly a lot of ideas I had with my co-worker kinda died when the world was set on fire (also personal life stuff) sorry for the in inconvenience.

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The story is a re-write of a re-write.

Don't know if this story will get another chapter, mostly a lot of ideas I had with my co-worker kinda died when the world was set on fire (also personal life stuff) sorry for the in inconvenience.

I'll be honest, I'm impressed. I always recommend that Authors finish a story before going back and rewriting chapters. Rewrites really do kill stories. For those reading this that have never thought about it, writing something new is fun and exciting, rewriting something you wrote before is more like work, and the writer seldom gets as positive feedback as they get for new content. It becomes drudgery and writers burn out.

I really do have to commend this Author though. This is a rewrite of a rewrite, and even though its already on Ver.3.0, the Author got all the way through 17 chapters. That's impressive as hell. The Author must really have a soft spot for this story.

Very well done.

The Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart

hay do more chapters it will not die i wont allow it to:heart::flutterrage:

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