Okay im finally up to date with this fic and hoping it doesn’t get canned like the other two version. And im happy to see that the story is moving at a better pace than the first and second one, now im hoping that when we get to Equestria the fic doesnt Lose Focus like the first one because that version it feels like it doesnt belong that much in fim fiction cause The ratio of pony and not pony arcs was like 70% notpony 30%pony (aka how many arcs or the fic Centered in Equestria) the second one feels even less but i think its cause it got canned before the cast could make it there, the pace of the prologue and remmant arc was a lot slower so it simply didnt reach the Equestria centric part but still reading this third version i feel like the pace its not so fast that stuff doesn’t sink in and that it isnt slow enough to feel like its going nowhere. Another think that i hope it doesnt happen are the deux ex machina that the grandma and aunt(i think it was) pull, i know that thy are god or technical god but it felt in those moments like Viri didnt do anything to change how it played out and she is the PWOTAGONIST, i feel that the second version sidestepped that but again that version was canned before that problem presented itself, and finally i want to send my love for molten fox (and all its versions) cuz i really enjoy reading them i like Viri (even tho sometimes i feel her character doesnt shine much) and i would like to see more of it, also the idea of initiating a faunus revolution in Equestria will always intrigue me even if the original version handwaved the issue of te changs that Viri brought. Still i love this fics and i hope to see more adventures of Viri the Mozilla Firefox.
Ouch
It's Quiet
Ouch... but I hope there is more coming soon
Please don't give up on this one.
Update
Okay im finally up to date with this fic and hoping it doesn’t get canned like the other two version. And im happy to see that the story is moving at a better pace than the first and second one, now im hoping that when we get to Equestria the fic doesnt Lose
Focus like the first one because that version it feels like it doesnt belong that much in fim fiction cause
The ratio of pony and not pony arcs was like 70% notpony 30%pony (aka how many arcs or the fic
Centered in Equestria) the second one feels even less but i think its cause it got canned before the cast could make it there, the pace of the prologue and remmant arc was a lot slower so it simply didnt reach the Equestria centric part but still reading this third version i feel like the pace its not so fast that stuff doesn’t sink in and that it isnt slow enough to feel like its going nowhere. Another think that i hope it doesnt happen are the deux ex machina that the grandma and aunt(i think it was) pull, i know that thy are god or technical god but it felt in those moments like Viri didnt do anything to change how it played out and she is the PWOTAGONIST, i feel that the second version sidestepped that but again that version was canned before that problem presented itself, and finally i want to send my love for molten fox (and all its versions) cuz i really enjoy reading them i like Viri (even tho sometimes i feel her character doesnt shine much) and i would like to see more of it, also the idea of initiating a faunus revolution in Equestria will always intrigue me even if the original version handwaved the issue of te changs that Viri brought. Still i love this fics and i hope to see more adventures of Viri the Mozilla Firefox.
Update
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?