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ExoDemonG


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A concept I haven't seen thrown around a lot. You got someone tracking this story. Can't wait to see what you bring to the table in this!

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A dragon sorceress concept? Really? I thought it was done before

Wow. This is a great start! Got me hooked already :pinkiehappy:, I'm looking foward to any future chapters!

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I haven't seen it thrown around a lot. Plus it's a D&D thing.

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Huh, Neat. Well I hope everyone enjoys it

8327956
Lol, what can I say, I like Dragon stories... but really I really hope people like the stories I’m making

Hmm... Odd, but I like the premise.
I await chapter 2! :V

Love it!!:pinkiehappy:

Please continue:heart:

You gonna update chapter 2?

More please, there arent enough good dragon stories on this sight. And most are just evil one shots!!!:twilightangry2:

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See, I tried to make an evil fic but simple couldn’t do it... mind shuts off after a line or three

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So are you not going to be continuing this story then?

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Who says I'm am?

... Wait that didn't sound right... I am

8438497
So this story is already dead ;-; sadface ...

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Oh... I guess I misinterpreted... I've never been the best at understanding the flow of a conversation... sorry

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It’s fine, I really suck at talking to others

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Guess we got that in common.

Author's Note:

Soooo... Dragon story, I like them because... dragons... I got nothing :P

I like dragons too :twilightsmile:

Author's Note:

So after my botched attempt of chapter two, I pulled the chapter and scrapped it. This is a start of sub chapters that'll follow the mane six that deals with Telyn, shadow dragons, and the Shadowfell.

Hope you all enjoy it :]

I am so far, looking forward to see were you take this :twilightsmile:

This is rife with spelling errors. You should get a proofreader (possibly me) or at least read through this again.

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It's a rough draft and someone already went through it.

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

Took quite a bit of time to release it but good chapter

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Yeah sorry about that, a lot of stuff got in the way (New job, a group I go to every Thursday, other story ideas, etc) made writing my stories harder

8609530
It's fine you still got the chapter out.

Our monkey here isn't the brightest. I mean who would make a stew in front of a cave entrance, without even looking into the cave to make sure no hungry beasts lurks within that awakens from the stews smell? :rainbowlaugh:

Also a plot convenient cave with a lot of stuff in it. Almost a bit too convenient. I honestly hope there is a backstory to that cave. :pinkiesmile:

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it’s the same cave from the show in Dragonshy

Everypony cheered at us, making Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie more existed from the attraction or… Pinkie. Rarity and Applejack took it with some modesty, even though Rarity did get a little giddy from the attraction. Fluttershy simply hid behind AJ out of fear of everypony looking at her.

This one paragraph has some mistakes and it is not the only one. You probably should take some time to read over your chapters again to really take care of the most obvious mistakes, or look for an Editor to help you out.

Other than that interesting chapter. Though I wonder what Celestia and Luna plan. I mean, they imprisoned the protagonist in stone with how much they deemed her a threat. They are not just going to ignore her now, are they? It would be strange if they did. :rainbowhuh:

The crypt was dark from sixty feet away from the light behind me if I had normal sight, but I don’t. Being blind and have to use magical means to see had it plus sides.

The first sentence would benefit from a rephrasing. The second has a typo: "having", not "have".

please my friend, can you update this wonderful story?

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I will continue it... though it'll be more of a remake of the story. I messed up this one and dumped it. Sorry :(

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