• Member Since 5th Apr, 2017
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Maziodyne


I am a Canadian who says "zee" instead of "zed", therefore I'm not normal.

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I go to Anime Con with three friends and then I turn into my Touhou OC, and end up in Ponyville.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 78 )

And, just to mess with you, FIRST! Welcome to Fimfiction, buddy!

Sorry the link to the Prologue isn't up yet. We're experiencing some technical difficulties with it right now, so just hang in there until we have them sorted out.

8115098 Thank you for the thumbs up. XD

Let's just hope to god that this thing actually does well...

8115285 So far so good, but to be honest, I wouldn't let it bother me if it doesn't.

8115294 Not that I'm that worried...it's just that It would feel devastating, to me at least..

Must admit I didn't think I would like this, but I'm glad I was wrong. 10/10 so far.

8125080
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

Displaced as a touhou OC, interesting, hopefully this story doesn't die like the others. I'll give this a look later.

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Don't worry, in the words of Alexandria:
"I don't die so easily."
But being serious: I don't plan on letting this story die anytime soon. I already have plenty planned for this story, all the way to chapter 5 in fact.

For anyone who might be confused: I added the gore tag because of some content in chapter 3 that I was unsure about. For all I know, I could have posted chapter 3 without needing to add the gore tag, but I thought it would be better to be safe rather than sorry.

Another good chapter, but it did feel a little rushed. If you want some advice, take your time you post chapter's more often than most do and a story this good is worth a little bit of a wait to get another good chapter.

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Alright, thank you for the feedback.

is it bad that i'm hoping for a scene where Shanghai and angel does verizon fights like a star wars one or a mortal combat one. it doesn't need to be official just something funny i just thought of.

I'm definitely enjoying what you've got so far. Keep it up!

I'm glad Marisa and Alice didn't try to attack Alex and i personal feel like you really captured their personalities! All in all, another great chapter!

8146558
Thank you very much! Unfortunately, every story needs an antagonist, and (story spoilers) said antagonist will show up in chapter 5.

8146571 True, and i think i might know who your antagonist is but you could always throw a curve ball and ave it be someone completely different. Even if you do that wont change how i'm enjoying this story.

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If you want to, you could tell me who you think the antagonist is. Of course, I won't tell you whether you're right or wrong, since that would spoil the reveal.

8146710 My first thought was Seija Kijin, but now that i think about it that might be a little to obvious. i'm still looking forward to the next chapter.

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As my Author's Note at the start of Chapter 4 says, Chapter 5 is already done. I'll probably wait until near the end of the week to upload it, so that I can have time to be absolutely sure that I'm happy with it.

8147561 That's not a problem, upload it when you're ready!

Medicine Melancholy. Wasn't expecting her but this is still a great choice. Can't wait for more!

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Yeah, the choice came right out of left field, as the expression goes. But as my Author's Note says, the logic behind it was pretty sound. Chapter 6 is in the works, and I'm planning to have a one-off antagonist in it.

Prologue should be up soon, just got to finish a few things in my second chapter and I can get it submitted!

8125080
Maz is a great friend, if there's one thing I can guaranty you about him it's that you will never find a spelling or grammar mistake in his writing, he's a little bit obsessive about correct spelling.

urgh Clownpiece. I don't know why but she really pisses me off, and Pinkie has some power over boundaries huh? gotta admit i would have never thought of that. Good chapter though!

8158866
In regards to Pinkie, the idea is that Double Rainboom is canon.

Due to a variety of difficulties Naturefang has been having with getting his story (and therefore the prologue) submitted, it's been decided that
Pyro Mance
will be uploading the prologue instead.

First things first. Go team ⑨! Second is Marissa ever going to 'borrow' books from Twilight? Even if she doesn't this is another very enjoyable chapter! Can't wait for more.

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I wouldn't be surprised if Marisa does "borrow" books from Twilight. Might do something with that in a later chapter.

But poor Cirno, taking a Master Spark to the face.

Way to go Cirno! You really are the strongest fairy in Gensokyo!

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:rainbowlaugh: To be honest, Medicine was being an ass to Cirno, so Medicine did kind of deserve it.
Also, just wondering if you caught the other Cirno meme that I put in this chapter.

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i assume it’s the English beef line, and if so that joke went over my head.

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In Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, during one of the Reimu stories (I don't remember if it's Reimu A or Reimu B), the last line of dialog before the fight with Cirno in Stage 2 is Cirno saying "I'll cryo-freeze you together with some English beef!!" Basically, that became a meme, because it sounds like a child trying (and failing) to sound tough.

first pic of the chapter not working, and yay! Medicines not ‘evil’ anymore. Great Chapter as always.

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I'll be working on getting a working URL for that image as soon as possible. Glad you liked the chapter. Also, if it wasn't obvious enough, I'm going to have a "friendly rivalry" type of situation between Alexandria and Medicine.

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personally i like that i idea, but now i wonder what would happen if Mima showed up.
“Everyone this is the Evil Spirit Mima.”
“EVIL SPIRIT?!”

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Cue "Mima will be in the next chapter" version of the "Mima will be in the next Touhou game" meme.

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Also, if Tojiko from Touhou 13 can be a powerful vengeful spirit without being evil, then it's probably possible to use Mima in a similar way.

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well Mima gave up being evil and spent most of her time trolling Reimu but her species is still ‘evil spirit’.

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It could probably be worked around by calling her a "vengeful spirit". Tojiko's species is "ghost" but she's always referred to as a vengeful spirit anyway.

The image of the pin is broken

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I'm already aware. But until I can get another URL for the image, I can't do anything about it.

I realized yesterday that there were two different kinds of apostrophes in my chapters. One works just fine. The other ruins the Text-to-Speech feature, and also just sort of breaks the word counting algorithm. Over the next several days, I'm going to be replacing all the "bad" apostrophes with "good" apostrophes.

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