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Takamura Konata


Hi guys, Kona-chan here! I just write what I would like to read myself, that doesn't mean it's good at all but I try.

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Flan became small again, that's cute.

She bites a lot, that's bad.

Remilia is on the end of it, that's painful.

She got an idea, that's good.

Give the ponies a chance to fix Flan's biting behavior, that's genius.

They succeding in their task? that's doubtful.


A spin off revolving in My Little Baker universe some time after the "battle."

A little idea I got after reading some stuff, so I thought why not? *CHOMP* AHH!!

Chapters (15)
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Alright, I'm interested. Proceed~

Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop...... bop!

What? 'mawp' can't hear you. :rainbowhuh:

Well, knowing Flandre 'breaking' is the tamest violence she can achieve.

CHOMP!

Flan is adorable and Twilight is going crazy... This is gonna be good.

Welp better let Nurse Redheart know ahead of time that Twilight's going to be there for a while, and the Princesses that Twilight's gone off the deep end.

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This is why you don't trust OCD horse to do stuff, like really!

Hey Flan? *she looks at me* Have fun

The moment you realize you pissed off a nigh immortal vampire with the power to destroy anything she wants even the immaterial and the penchant for playing with her 'toys' until they are destroyed. Twilight this is your life for the next... twelve minutes I guess.

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In all fairness is the "toys'" fault for not being sturdy enough :ajsmug:

What is bittie behavior? Do you mean bratty?

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Oh, my bad. I didn't even notice that, thanks for pointing it out :twilightsmile:

Double Spoiler!

I wanted to read a few chapters here before I read what I found out to be the original story, are these original characters or ocs?
Do you have a link for me so I could read about them if I need to understand something?

“No, no one assaulted me; I actually manipulated fate to avoid any uncomfortable encounters until I got to meet you.” Remilia explained when something tiny jumped to the ground behind her, but still covered by the parasol’s shadow.

They look more powerfull or have that kind of magic that I don't exactly enjoy, but I guess she isn't going to be so important that long.

“Well, if you are so confident then by all means go ahead Miss Twilight.” Remilia turned to leave, but gave a last look at Twilight. “Before I forget, Flan is going to stay here until I get a report saying that her habit is under control, I made myself clear Miss Twilight?” she said while giving Twilight a look.

it seems someone should show her how to behave.

I see if I will enjoy it.

Rarity’s mannequin has been broken (Twilight’s body too, but that doesn’t matter).

Twilight has a glass body.

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No, they're not OCs, the Scarlet sisters are from Touhou, which can be resumed as the world with total lack of common sense, there are a lot of characters with absurd abilities in there.

https://en.touhouwiki.net/wiki/Flandre_Scarlet just leaving Flan because she's the only prevalent character on this.

The story is not meant to be taken seriously (at least most of it), because there's a clear gap between the ponies and Flan's power. In fact Flan's power is downgraded quite a bit on this, and her personality is a little different too.

A clear sign is Twilight being "broken" a lot and just showing slights amounts of damage on her body that doesn't really hinders her from trying to complete her task.

I don't exactly understand the situation, was Twrilight trying to say that Flan should not move and listen to her because otherwise Flan would hurt her friends?

hhmmm that was to soon toi end here in my opinion, it was not bad but the whole thing is slightly shorter than I would have liked it, I go see the extra chapters now.

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The intention there was something like simulating a hostage situation, kind of like "if you don't do as I say, I'll hurt the hostages and it will be your fault."

Twilight was a little nuts by that point so she unintentionally would have done something dumb just to get Flan to listen to her and therefore finish her task.

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Maybe, but I didn't really wanted to drag the plot anymore, I could have done something else sure, but I didn't feel like doing so.

But hey, at least I got some will power to expand it some with a sequel, I just hope not to screw that one over :twilightsheepish:

I didn't liked this chapter and it was to short.

I get the feeling I won't really like the little bonus chapters. They don't look as good as the other stuff.

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That is basically because Flan is not nerfed on them. Or at least not as much as in the main story.

That and the situations portrayed are just silly scenarios with no context whatsoever.

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