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Maziodyne


I am a Canadian who says "zee" instead of "zed", therefore I'm not normal.

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i like it but damn its a long start to a story

8434468
Yeah, and chapter 2 looks like it'll be following in chapter 1's shoes, length-wise. Might want to expect long chapters to be the norm with this one. 😅

8434494
I better grab some popcorn then

Me: ... Hey Alice, Alex's gone crazy!
Alice: What?! HOW!
Me: Her Yokai half's acting up! she's acting like her mom! She's in Canterlot now get over there and stop her!
Alice:(flies of faster then Aya on a sugar rush) GOD DAMN IT ALEXXXXX!!!!!!!

and that's what went through my head when Alex's personalty got flipped.

Oh shit Mima's here........ OH SHIT MIMA'S HERE! All jokes aside I did think it was a good fight but I always though Mima would be more of a troll that you don't want to piss off. Then this kind of evil because from what I know about her she gave up with the hole 'I'm an evil b**ch and you will kneel before me' thing and there's more then one kind of 'evil'

8446224
She technically still has a superiority complex even in her last appearance in Touhou 5, since she told Shinki (the god of Makai) that she was the god of the human world/Gensokyo. So I decided to give her the same sort of superiority complex type of personality here in order to use her as a villain.

8446542
Really? I didn't know that but then again I only know Mima from a Let's Play of Touhou Mother and a Wiki since I haven't found a way to get any of the Touhou games, but i'll play em one day! Thanks for the new info.

8446571
Here's the entirety of Mima's story in Mystic Square (Touhou 5) translated into English. The part where she tells Shinki that she's the god of the human world is down in the final stage dialogue.
Mima's Route

8434495
Yeah, Maz has more time on his hands with this story. So he can literally just focus on writing a chapter for a day or two if he wants.

Also I know it's fucked up, but the later part of this was a little funny to me. What the he'll is wrong with my brain that I find shit like this entertaining and stuff like Russian Sleep Experiment a good story to use to help me sleep.

“Sorry, sorry,” Starlight says with a grimace. Then, all of a sudden, Ayis begins to look sick, and rushes to the bathroom, the sound of vomiting coming from within a moment later.

Why do I have a feeling that this is morning sickness.

*reads a couple more paragraphs*

I WAS BLOODY RIGHT!
IT WAS MORNING SICKNESS!

Maz. You sly asshole you told me you didn't know how to start a good relationship in your writing.

8450031
To be honest, that wasn't entirely me. Ayis is Timeless Celestial's character, and he suggested the relationship, and he's also the one writing Ayis. I really just went with the flow.

So, a couple things about chapter 3... It might be quite a good while before it goes up. Also, due to good ol' lack of communication and coordination, there's apparently quite a few things my buddy Pyro Mance wants done in the story, so depending on how things go, those things I mentioned in the chapter 2 Author's Note about chapter 3 may or may not end up being pushed back to chapter 4.

Good to see your still active here Maz.

8718202
I have no excuse for this outrageous tardiness... I can't apologize enough... 😓

8718762
You update faster than me, so seriously Maz, it's fine

Eirin and Reisen are part of the Circle? Eirin you've got some explaining to do! *Cracks knuckles*

8720487
Well, Kaguya isn't exactly present. Because of that, Eirin would be far more interested in furthering her own "medicinal" research. Since the Circle wouldn't care if the things she makes are legal or not, and she's quite a genius (not to mention that I personally don't think Eirin herself would care much as long as she gets to do her research), I just thought it to be fair to say Eirin would be a part of the Circle. Not to mention that Eirin was technically already a fugitive in Gensokyo anyway.

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