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9934222
Thank you. If you ever find anything wrong, please tell me. I want feedback, so I can shape it accordingly.

9934778
Thank you. I also really love titanfall, and I was inspired by the song from JT Machinima for number 2. Also, I have been looking at the other Titanfall stories around the website, and been using pieces here and there to make a great story. Like I said in the third chapter authors notes, I took the idea for a ruined city in the desert from another story. Have good day.

"The phase shift. It is still very expirimental, so we will really need to work out the kinks, but it works close to what it is supposed to. It allows you to phase out of our reality, into a small subspace that is just like our reality, and slip out to get the tactical advantage on an enemy." The colonel speaks up. wellp I gess I know he gets displaysed now

But, when I was coming down, my phase shifter malfunctioned, and the next thing I see, is not the forest I was supposed to land in, but a desert and ruins nvm agen I was right in chapter 1

9958438
What? I'm sorry, I dont understand?

9958471
in chapter 1 I gesed that that whould be how he got displaysed

Oh, yeah, I saw it in another Titanfall story, but the titans phase shift was ruptured, and they tried a jump, and ended up in Equestria.

9958693
It also has to do with the fact that Apollo is somehow associated with the moon.

Damn insensible much Celestia?

9959239
When Jack mentioned his wife

9959603
Yeah, I had that idea from the beginning. Do you think it was a good idea? I might change Twilights titan designation. I have a good idea, but I need to see if I should do it.

9959612
I am not that versed in Titanfall so I don't know about the Titans designation, and the only thing I can say about Celestia is that war changes people

9959908
Well, for the most part, it happens like BT-7274. Thats all anyone has on titan designations, besides just calling them the class name. I decided to go with actual designations because it made better sense than saying each titans class, and in a fight, you would have to pick out who is who. Like if I had Twilights ion versus another ion, I won't be saying the class title, but Magi vs ion, and everyone would understand. It helps with writing this all out. I will be giving designations to all the mane 6 titans, as well as any main characters, so that people will know who is doing what.

Comment posted by The Radiance deleted Nov 25th, 2019

One way that AI's were made was to take the brain of a recently deceased person, and then run electricity through it, into a blank core.

I am surprised he didn't notice anything with what he said besides his Titan's similar voice to his desead wife

9959946
Ah I meant that designation, I think for twilight is a good combination, but for the other are going to be more complicated

9959960
And the fact that his phase shift probably send him forward in time

9960019
It doesnt send anyone forward. It just moves them into a different space, in the same time dilation as our regular world. It just does space, not time.

9959962
I dont think so. I mainly did the designation off the element, not the pilot. The others will be somewhere along those lines.

9960027
cant wait for more i love titanfall 1 and 2 keep up the good work :D

harvester defense with two people, yea not even going to try that

I have, it sucks. Mainly it happens when people leave mid match. I have never had two players from the start. It does suck though, even on easy.

9991855
That must really suck. I've not played master yet, and I am almost afraid to try.

"Commander, it's good to see you. Me and my men have been holding the fort for a while now." I almost faint when he starts talking. I will call him Sergeant Avery Johnson, and that is his name forevermore.

Titan fall and Halo... hmm. Interesting mix...

Update soon? This is an actually good Titanfall cross-over! And it has been active in the last five years!
Come on man! Please!?

10103404
Don't worry, I am already started on the next chapter. Also, that's the reason I made one. All the other good Titanfall fics are dead, or so far out of date. I wanted one up to date, and decided to make one. Don't worry though, I will post soon. Within the next two months, at max.

10318858
I'm working on the next one currently, the girls finally get to go into battle

10044537
I just made the character, but for some reason, I really dont know why, he came out that way. I hadnt played any Halo recently, but he came out like this. And so, he is now a staple of this story.

10103404
Sorry I didn't post in two months. Do expect this to continue though, it wont die easily.

10318907
Taking a good while for the story to continue, lost inspiration or something?

10552250
No, I just am taking too long on my next chapter, mainly because I have so many story ideas, I have to write them down. Plus, I am doing a part of the next chapter to a song, and it is from DMC 5, as I had recently played it, and the song was cool at the time. I'm keeping it, but it is taking me time to write the chapter. But no, I have not at all lost interest or inspiration in my stories.

10552382
Ah, alright, thanks for the information. Although, I may very well just go through this story and edit it. I spotted quite a few grammatical mistakes that I could easily correct. No spaces in-between words, improperly spelled words, ect. I could fix these for you. Mind if I do so?

10553344
Sure. I actually type these on my phone, so it's bound to happen. I dont have access to a computer, so some things get lost or butchered due to thumbs.

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