so far I like this

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Thank you. If you ever find anything wrong, please tell me. I want feedback, so I can shape it accordingly.

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Thank you. I also really love titanfall, and I was inspired by the song from JT Machinima for number 2. Also, I have been looking at the other Titanfall stories around the website, and been using pieces here and there to make a great story. Like I said in the third chapter authors notes, I took the idea for a ruined city in the desert from another story. Have good day.

One way that AI's were made was to take the brain of a recently deceased person, and then run electricity through it, into a blank core.

I am surprised he didn't notice anything with what he said besides his Titan's similar voice to his desead wife

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And the fact that his phase shift probably send him forward in time

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It doesnt send anyone forward. It just moves them into a different space, in the same time dilation as our regular world. It just does space, not time.