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LordKioshi


"A non-professional writer, writing for the fun of it and doing his best all the while! Enjoy!"

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Sounds promising, I'll keep an eye on your fic.
Keep gonig ! :raritywink:

Well written, brand spaknin new and star wars? I cant wait for the next chapter!

snapped, crackled and popped

I need some cereal...but liquor instead of milk.

Well this looks interesting, looking forward to seeing more and where things go from here. I know theres no romance tag here but kinda hope we get some romance for the Mando later on.

One stood forth from the mass. "You have my hammer!"

And another. "And you have my instruments!"

And another. "And my land!"

"This is the way."

two Memes really :rainbowlaugh:

Why doesn't Fendral Marika have a pony name? I mean, I'm assuming he's a pony... I haven't actually read the story yet.

Hmm interesting and so far Selene isn’t bad and hope to see more of her and I have a feeling she’s gonna join the group when they leave the empire. And for some reason I’m picturing her appearance similar to Loona’s from Helluva Boss. Mostly with saying she’s a Lycan.

Nice work here and a good fight between the Mando and Sombra. And to me I can see a good bond of friendship, if not more then that, will form between Fendral and Selene and I hope it does later on. If not then hay your story.

"Why? Does your religion restrict you from loving somepony?" Shining Armour asked,

nah, Weapons are his religion, they ain't got any qualms about love

Well didn’t saw this coming and things are getting interesting here. I have a feeling only a few from the pony race could actually become Mandalorians as Luna, Applejack, Rainbow Dash for sure and maybe some from the Wonder Bolts. The rest no way in hell could they do it or even deserve to be one. Most likely the new Mandalorians are gonna be other races and more on the predator side then prey.

Looking forward to seeing how the new Mandalorians rise here and how Selene does going threw the training and such on this hard journey.

W̵̞̉h̴̨͝ò̴̡ ̶̝̎I̴̲͂s̸̩̈ ̶̗̄ȟ̵̘e̷͇̿r̷͒ͅé̶̪?̴̟̿ ̶̩̏Ÿ̸͇́o̸̭͝ư̵̢ ̷̰̈́w̷͍͋i̷͖͋l̸̕ͅl̵̤̃ ̷͍͛f̴̗͊ǎ̶̭i̸̓͜l̴̘̍,̴͓͠ ̴̙͂y̴͖͐ó̴͈ǘ̶̻ ̶̲̾w̵͔͝ḯ̵̮ḷ̵̊l̸̛̠ ̸̬̽a̵̙͂l̷̦̓ḷ̴̆ ̸̬̏f̷̈͜a̶̳̋i̶̗͑l̸̓͜.̸̫͑ ̵͇͛T̷̪̾h̴̩͂e̸̼̾y̷͚͌ ̷͇̓d̶͔̂e̶̠͊ṇ̵̇y̶͛͜ ̶̦̏o̶͕͐u̴͕͊r̷͈̕ ̵̖͘t̶̗̔ơ̴̼ư̵̮c̶͕͌h̸̝̓.̵̤̕ ̷̨̈́W̸̻͗e̵͈͠ ̴͉̉m̴̤̾u̵̖̐s̸͇̈́t̷̯͒ ̸̟͐r̵͙̋ȅ̸̼t̵̺̐ũ̴̠r̵̜͆n̵͕͆.̷̙͂ ̶̳͆B̴̬̔r̷̘͌e̴̲͆á̵̡k̷̻̂ ̵̦͊y̴̬̐o̸̱͝ų̷̉r̷̛̮ ̵̛̟s̸̫̀e̵͓͝a̶̝͆l̷̟̇.̴̰͠ ̵̞͘Y̴̗͘ŏ̷͚ȗ̴̯'̷̞̏l̸̡͌l̵̟̐ ̵̞̍n̷̢͛e̸̤̍v̴͓́e̶͉͊r̷̟̆ ̶̡̂s̵͖̀u̵̠̾r̴̢̆v̷̝̚ĭ̶̹v̷̡̇e̸̪͝!̷́ͅ ̵̱̍Y̸͈͝ò̵̧ů̷͔ ̷̫̉m̶̫̑u̵̥͝s̵̲̚t̵̮̽.̸̖̅.̵͔͂.̴̛̯t̴͇̐a̶͕̽k̷͎͘e̶̱̕ ̵̲̑t̶͊͜h̷̬̍ẽ̴̟m̴͓̆!"

nice astartes reference

"Well, I may as well start from the beginning. An empire in the frozen north went into missing a few hundred years ago due to the one who ruled it that the time. A unicorn by the name of 'Sombra' went mad with power, over throw the existing ruler at the time and enslaved the citizens, taking great joy out of their misery. Me and my sister went to stop him, but he had a failsafe planned. When defeated, he cast a powerful spell that that made the empire go into a magic induced suspended animation, freezing everyone in place, along with pulling the empire into the Icey depths below.

Weren't the sisters the ones who vanished, banished the empire?

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I dunno, that's just my interpretation of it

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It's essentially a time line where: events aren't in the order they should be, altered to be different to how they are in the show or they just don't happen at all
Just a fancy way of saying a parallel universe which I put in before I saw the it as a tag :facehoof:

Those shoulder pads look like Mijolnier O.D.S.T shoulder pads!O.D.S.T

Sadge to see this cancelled, seems it was on to a good start. Ah well

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